Hate This

hate this
wish i had a wintess
to see the undeniable truth
of how you denied my youth
so young oh so delicate
the small droplet
of hurt and pain
they roll down showing strain
my life is this ride
i chose to have by my side
my questions are useless
as i try to pick up the mess
that you left when you went away
this is the choice i make to fray
i know, i know i should stop
its not my fault that you love me a lot
it is yours that was your choice
now were left with unwanted noise
help help me get out of this
noone knows how much i hate this
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Goff Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 6:10 PM
the sun still rises! the morning birds never leave us! life's journey is a twisted path, but the sun.....
Fraser Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 4:34 PM
Background of hurt here Autumn, hopefully it's about being restricted to being a teenager, by not bein allowed out late etc>>James
Moreno Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 12:19 PM
"the small droplet of hurt and pain" nice line Autumn...Raul
Kendrick Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 12:18 PM
Interesting work. Sara
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