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Hate This

hate this wish i had a wintess to see the undeniable truth of how you denied my youth so young oh so delicate the small droplet of hurt and pain they roll down showing strain my life is this ride i chose to have by my side my questions are useless as i try to pick up the mess that you left when you went away this is the choice i make to fray i know, i know i should stop its not my fault that you love me a lot it is yours that was your choice now were left with unwanted noise help help me get out of this noone knows how much i hate this

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/5/2009 6:10:00 PM
the sun still rises! the morning birds never leave us! life's journey is a twisted path, but the sun.....
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Date: 9/5/2009 4:34:00 PM
Background of hurt here Autumn, hopefully it's about being restricted to being a teenager, by not bein allowed out late etc>>James
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Date: 9/5/2009 12:19:00 PM
"the small droplet of hurt and pain" nice line Autumn...Raul
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Date: 9/5/2009 12:18:00 PM
Interesting work. Sara
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