Brian Davey Poet Rhyme

Hate the Haters

Comparatively you will never be like me
        You do not have the necessary personality
     Your judgements about me are undefined
        Being equipped without the stronger mind
     Jealousy is the ugliest character defect
        To hate on me does not earn you respect
     People like you are societies negative breed
        Never a helping hand just one held out in greed
     Trying so very hard for your voice to be heard
        But there is no substance behind your word
     Stubbornly you just continue on trying
        Everyone else already knows you are lying
     All that you do just makes me stronger
        I doubt you'll even be around much longer
     So next time that you may decide to attack
        I'll be right behind you so better watch your back



                                        11/15/17
    Written for contest: "Judgemental People & Haters"
                           Hosted by: Brenda Chiri

                 Placed 4th in Contest Results

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Indiana Shaw October 31, 2019 at 4:12 PM Love it . . . ; )

Courtney Fritz May 17, 2018 at 9:53 AM Wow that’s great! Brian Davey May 18, 2018 at 4:37 AM Thank you

Eve Roper December 12, 2017 at 8:41 PM Excellent, Brian, congratulations on your win hugs Eve Brian Davey December 15, 2017 at 4:30 PM Thank you Eve

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart December 12, 2017 at 1:25 PM Succinct pen! Congratulations :) Brian Davey December 13, 2017 at 12:32 PM Thank you Maureen

Robert Lindley December 11, 2017 at 5:00 PM Truly insightful and revealing verses about those that take pleasure in attacking/hurting others. Congratulations on your win in Brenda's contest my friend! Brian Davey December 13, 2017 at 12:32 PM Thank you Robert I am especially happy that you enjoyed it for the inspiration came from you Through Brenda in this Contest! If you ever need a friend I am here for you, thanks again!

Jan Allison November 15, 2017 at 4:51 PM Bravo Brian you have written such a powerful poem and sadly much I can relate to during my journey on soup especially in my early days and i do think a lot of issues are down to jealousy . Am adding it to my faves:-) Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Brian Davey November 15, 2017 at 4:59 PM Thank you Jan and you know that you only have a friend and supporter in me Sweetheart!