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Hate Hole

Inside the sky is bleak and black Are you still stuck in that old score? In cold your mind will call you back It’s all you see is your own sore This black and blue is your own crime Your life grows smaller with each hate This cold collects and freezes time Your lonely is a painful state Now break the black and find the light Just warm your eyes and take a look This light is love, it’s worth the fight Just leave the past and that hate hook The light finds you a new warm state Now free and light, no more hate fate

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 3/8/2019 4:49:00 PM
To learn what love was had to look, Some weird story up start to cook; Bottle spin; Kiss again; Love fell out when book we shook.
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Date: 1/19/2019 3:35:00 PM
Great sonnet James.. Nice to see you back.
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Just James
Date: 2/6/2019 7:54:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 1/13/2019 3:16:00 PM
JAMES!!! You're back!! I only thought to check when I saw an old comment from you. YABBADABBADOO!!!
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Just James
Date: 1/13/2019 11:54:00 PM
Hi My friend...:)

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