Hate Hole

Inside the sky is bleak and black 
Are you still stuck in that old score? 
In cold your mind will call you back 
It’s all you see is your own sore 

This black and blue is your own crime
Your life grows smaller with each hate 
This cold collects and freezes time 
Your lonely is a painful state 

Now break the black and find the light 
Just warm your eyes and take a look 
This light is love, it’s worth the fight 
Just leave the past and that hate hook


The light finds you a new warm state 
Now free and light, no more hate fate

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 3/8/2019 4:49:00 PM
To learn what love was had to look, Some weird story up start to cook; Bottle spin; Kiss again; Love fell out when book we shook.
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Date: 1/19/2019 3:35:00 PM
Great sonnet James.. Nice to see you back.
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Just James
Date: 2/6/2019 7:54:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 1/13/2019 3:16:00 PM
JAMES!!! You're back!! I only thought to check when I saw an old comment from you. YABBADABBADOO!!!
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Date: 1/13/2019 11:54:00 PM
Hi My friend...:)
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