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Hate

Let the rising, Angry cord, Rip through you, Feel the ecstasy of the metal, Let the pure loathing roll through you, Try to look fierce, And promptly trip over your own feet. Deep breath, Focus on the anger, The dark metal pounding through your head, Lose yourself in the ecstasy Of the ANGER, Let the singer's pain drown your own. Close your eyes, Feel the pain of the betrayal, Let the melancholy cords pull you down down down into the feeling of defeat. Then, Rise, Dark Phoenix, Fan the flames of your hate higher, And plan your revenge.
March 6, 2015 2nd place Love por Hate pick a subject #2

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Date: 3/16/2015 9:00:00 PM
Amelia.. A belated congrats on your sweet win!
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Amelia Harmon
Date: 3/17/2015 4:34:00 AM
Thank you! XD
Date: 3/12/2015 9:35:00 AM
meditation ...a yogic way to plan a revenge. Wow... a very special poem.Love & Congrats on win Amelia..rajat
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Amelia Harmon
Date: 3/14/2015 2:31:00 AM
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. The best revenge is the kind they don't see coming.
Date: 3/12/2015 2:40:00 AM
Great imagery Amelia n so is the win! Big congrats!
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Amelia Harmon
Date: 3/14/2015 2:28:00 AM
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 3/11/2015 3:24:00 PM
Deep dark imagery I like your take on the theme - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Amelia Harmon
Date: 3/11/2015 7:15:00 PM
Thank you! I enjoyed writing it. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 3/11/2015 7:45:00 AM
I like that, "lose yourself in the ecstacy of the anger" that is a powerful image. Well done placing in the contest, and a well done write ~
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Amelia Harmon
Date: 3/11/2015 8:28:00 AM
Thank you! I think that's what happens when you get really mad, you jusy get lost and all there is is anger. And that in turn just kind of leads to more hate and pain because you dp things you honestly don't mean.
Date: 3/10/2015 8:57:00 PM
beautifully pen Amelia congrats on 2nd place hugs
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Amelia Harmon
Date: 3/11/2015 6:16:00 AM
Thank you!!!! XD
Date: 3/6/2015 10:19:00 AM
Very creative take on the subject of hate, Amelia. You could also categorize this as a shape poem. Did you enter this into the Pick A Subject #2 contest? If not, you should!
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Amelia Harmon
Date: 3/11/2015 8:29:00 AM
2nd place, undoubtedly you were correct! Thanks gor believing!
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Amelia Harmon
Date: 3/7/2015 4:25:00 AM
I meant to... Maybe I haven't! Thank you!