Amelia Harmon Poet Free verse

Hate

Let the rising,
Angry cord,
Rip through you,
Feel the ecstasy of the metal,
Let the pure loathing roll through you,
Try to look fierce,
And promptly trip over your own feet.

Deep breath,
Focus on the anger,
The dark metal pounding through your head,
Lose yourself in the ecstasy
Of the ANGER,
Let the singer's pain drown your own.

Close your eyes,
Feel the pain of the betrayal,
Let the melancholy cords
pull you down
down
down
into the feeling of defeat.

Then, 
Rise,
Dark Phoenix,
Fan the flames of your hate higher,
And plan your revenge.

March 6, 2015
2nd place Love por Hate pick a subject #2

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty March 12, 2015 at 9:35 AM meditation ...a yogic way to plan a revenge. Wow... a very special poem.Love & Congrats on win Amelia..rajat Amelia Harmon March 14, 2015 at 2:31 AM Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. The best revenge is the kind they don't see coming.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma March 12, 2015 at 2:40 AM Great imagery Amelia n so is the win! Big congrats! Amelia Harmon March 14, 2015 at 2:28 AM Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!

Jan Allison March 11, 2015 at 3:24 PM Deep dark imagery I like your take on the theme - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx Amelia Harmon March 11, 2015 at 7:15 PM Thank you! I enjoyed writing it. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Casarah Nance March 11, 2015 at 7:45 AM I like that, "lose yourself in the ecstacy of the anger" that is a powerful image. Well done placing in the contest, and a well done write ~ Amelia Harmon March 11, 2015 at 8:28 AM Thank you! I think that's what happens when you get really mad, you jusy get lost and all there is is anger. And that in turn just kind of leads to more hate and pain because you dp things you honestly don't mean.

Shadow Hamilton March 10, 2015 at 8:57 PM beautifully pen Amelia congrats on 2nd place hugs Amelia Harmon March 11, 2015 at 6:16 AM Thank you!!!! XD

Laura Leiser March 6, 2015 at 10:19 AM Very creative take on the subject of hate, Amelia. You could also categorize this as a shape poem. Did you enter this into the Pick A Subject #2 contest? If not, you should! Amelia Harmon March 11, 2015 at 8:29 AM 2nd place, undoubtedly you were correct! Thanks gor believing! Amelia Harmon March 7, 2015 at 4:25 AM I meant to... Maybe I haven't! Thank you!