Hate

hate

Its a strong word,
but some of these feelings are absurd.
im confused...
was it not what i beleived?
was it a phony plan concieved ?
to just use me?
if so i hate you ...
so much  have to thank you.
for without your fake love it wouldnt of been so clear,
to see tha man above.
and when i say i hate you....
i really hate me tha way i was.
Fake hopes,Fake dreams,Fake love is all that it seems.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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November 29, 2018 at 4:02 PM
I like that line "When I say I hate you I really hate me the way I was.." That’s actually a brilliant observation written into an honest statement. Good job.
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