Andrew Legan Poet Rhyme

Hate

 
Do you hear my silent cries?
Or do you set me to the side?
For in my mind the black bird flies,
In the Darkness of my mind


For each breath you take,
For each word you speak,
I slowly grow in hate
For you, is who, my Darkness seek


Do you hear my scream of hate,
Just wanting you to die?
For now I wait, for you fate,
In the Darkness of my mind!

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Shannon Hawley October 24, 2011 at 9:54 AM I really liked your poem. I can relate to the feelings. Nice job,

Dr.Ram Mehta October 21, 2011 at 6:13 PM Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Andrew

Carol Sunshine Brown October 21, 2011 at 5:27 AM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Andrew. Love, Carol

David William Breidenthal October 11, 2011 at 10:47 PM Ooooh nice job, Andrew! Did you really feel anger while writing this poem? I could feel it when I read your poem! X)

Carolyn Dye October 11, 2011 at 5:21 PM love your poem titled hate can relate to those words, keep up the good work you do!!

Betty Gail Wood August 28, 2011 at 12:46 AM I'm so proud of you! Keep it up. New chapter in your life, new things to write about.

Carol Sunshine Brown August 25, 2011 at 9:56 AM Lift your pen and let your creative words flow onto the paper Andrew. Thank you for sharing your writing with us as I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning. Love, Carol