Hate

A stinging pain falls upon my face making my vision turn red. 
I look up into your eyes and see nothing but the rage and hate in your souls windows,
How could someone be so angry?
How can you go day to day knowing what you do?
I was kind, I was good.
But you made me like this.

Hit,
	After Hit,
			After Hit,

Put me deeper,
		And deeper, 
				And deeper,

Into the dark where there was only a spark of hope left 
But that even started fading as you continued to throw you anger at me.
Was I the one who made you like this?
Me your ’one and only’
How could someone be so angry?
How can you go day to day knowing what you do?
I was brave, I was slipping.

Fading,
		And fading,
				And fading,

Into a deep,
		   Deep,
				Deep,

Darkness that made me lose my mind
You made me like this.
I can finally throw my anger at you.
How does it feel now mother?
You cry and ask me to stop, but did you ever listen?
Me your ‘one and only’
How could I be so angry?
How can I go day to day knowing what I do?

Very,
		Very,
				Very,

Simple.

I can go day to day knowing that I made myself free,
Of all the hate you would throw at me.
Can you handle mine?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/4/2012 11:01:00 AM
Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Evan. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/20/2011 2:04:00 PM
Evan Nelson, i respectfully disagree, too often continues hate, unable to set the writer free, from passing on the hater's fate. ;-\
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Date: 11/16/2011 7:08:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week Evan. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/16/2011 3:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, evan
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Date: 8/15/2011 12:00:00 PM
so angry! a great write - i like how you used the white space to emphasize your feelings. congratulations on your hm :)
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Date: 7/21/2011 1:18:00 PM
superbly penned with my best CONGRATS! :) huggs!
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Date: 7/21/2011 4:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Catie Lindsey's contest "New Free Verse" Evan. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/20/2011 3:29:00 PM
Congrats Evan on your HM with this dynamic poetry luv.. enjoy special honor.. a fantastic subject u chose ...
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Date: 7/19/2011 8:43:00 AM
Wow this was exciting to read simply because of the suspence. I am glad you are now free and what dosn't kill us makes us stronger. Great write. (:
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Date: 7/18/2011 11:32:00 PM
and you went deep into the most raw part of your gut, evan... a searingly beutiful work! :) hugggs. nette
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