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Hatchlings

Sunrise warmly awakens hatchlings nestled soundly asleep last night. 5/28/22 Contest: Morning Monoku Poetry Contest. Sponsor: Michelle Faulkner ( 17 syllables, checked with Howmanysyllables.com)

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/4/2022 3:12:00 PM

Ahh!! I can see the scene. Thank you for the honor of placing in your contest and for dropping by to tell me that I placed. Sara

Valsa George

Date: 6/1/2022 5:18:00 AM

I imagine it in my mind.... ! I have watched hatchlings rising with sunlight ! Beautiful monoku....

Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/1/2022 1:49:00 PM

Thank you Valsa!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/29/2022 11:10:00 PM

Love your sweet poem.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/30/2022 5:12:00 AM

Thank you Victor!

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 5/29/2022 5:05:00 AM

Sweet are the "hatchlings","nestled soundly asleep last night"~ love it! Good luck in the contest. :)Paulette

Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/29/2022 5:32:00 AM

Thank you Paulette!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/29/2022 4:42:00 AM

Love the image Tania, hope your weekend is going well. Tom

Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/29/2022 5:32:00 AM

Thank you Tom, hope your weekend is going well too!

Valerie Staton

Date: 5/29/2022 3:21:00 AM

You paint a beautiful picture with words.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/29/2022 4:33:00 AM

Thank you Valerie!

Jenna Logan

Date: 5/29/2022 2:54:00 AM

A sweet, gentle write, Tania. I hope it wins for you.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/29/2022 4:34:00 AM

Thank you Jenna!