Tania Kitchin Poet Monoku

Hatchlings

Sunrise warmly awakens hatchlings nestled soundly asleep last night.

5/28/22

Contest: Morning Monoku Poetry Contest.
Sponsor: Michelle Faulkner

( 17 syllables, checked with Howmanysyllables.com)

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Sara Kendrick July 4, 2022 at 3:12 PM Ahh!! I can see the scene. Thank you for the honor of placing in your contest and for dropping by to tell me that I placed. Sara

Valsa George June 1, 2022 at 5:18 AM I imagine it in my mind.... ! I have watched hatchlings rising with sunlight ! Beautiful monoku.... Tania Kitchin June 1, 2022 at 1:49 PM Thank you Valsa!

Victor Buhagiar May 29, 2022 at 11:10 PM Love your sweet poem. Tania Kitchin May 30, 2022 at 5:12 AM Thank you Victor!

Paulette Calasibetta May 29, 2022 at 5:05 AM Sweet are the "hatchlings","nestled soundly asleep last night"~ love it! Good luck in the contest. :)Paulette Tania Kitchin May 29, 2022 at 5:32 AM Thank you Paulette!

Tom Cunningham May 29, 2022 at 4:42 AM Love the image Tania, hope your weekend is going well. Tom Tania Kitchin May 29, 2022 at 5:32 AM Thank you Tom, hope your weekend is going well too!

Valerie Staton May 29, 2022 at 3:21 AM You paint a beautiful picture with words. Tania Kitchin May 29, 2022 at 4:33 AM Thank you Valerie!

Jenna Logan May 29, 2022 at 2:54 AM A sweet, gentle write, Tania. I hope it wins for you. Tania Kitchin May 29, 2022 at 4:34 AM Thank you Jenna!