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hatch of horseflies

hatch of horseflies under blanketed storage prepare their offense

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Suzette Richards
Date: 8/16/2024 12:58:00 AM
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Congrats Kim. This was a unique take on the topic. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2024 6:43:00 AM
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Thank you, Suzette! Based on true story.
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Paige Hind
Date: 7/29/2024 4:47:00 PM
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Oh, gosh, LOL. I unfortunately don't care for them, they freak me out.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/29/2024 7:53:00 PM
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Dealt with them once!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/27/2024 8:43:00 PM
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Ooh. I'm preparing my defense. Nothing scarier than a horse that flies. lol. ~ gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2024 5:40:00 AM
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Right?!
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 7/27/2024 11:45:00 AM
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Horrid insects that bite and one wonders is it humans that first invented warfare and secretly plan an attack behind closed doors, instead of under blanketed storage, plotting their offense. Wonderful Senryu Kim, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/27/2024 12:56:00 PM
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ooh…just love when a reader adds to the mystique, what they see in between the lines, under the blanket, behind closed doors. You make my day ~ Kim
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/26/2024 1:38:00 PM
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I am glad I am not there because their bite is awful. LOL.. Thanks for sharing. Sara K
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2024 3:41:00 PM
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Few years back. Not ours but left at our house.
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Silent One
Date: 7/26/2024 12:30:00 PM
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Great arrangement of words.. an excellent senryu..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2024 3:41:00 PM
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Thank you, Silent!
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Hilo Poet
Date: 7/26/2024 11:47:00 AM
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This I believe exacts Suze's step off that mundane hishway and get lost in Frost, if it be for the contest GL Kim. Aloha William
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2024 3:42:00 PM
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Thank you and it is for her contest!

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