hatch of horseflies

hatch of horseflies under blanketed storage prepare their offense
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Richards Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 12:58 AM
Congrats Kim. This was a unique take on the topic. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 6:43 AM
Thank you, Suzette! Based on true story.
Hind Avatar
July 29, 2024 at 4:47 PM
Oh, gosh, LOL. I unfortunately don't care for them, they freak me out.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 29, 2024 at 7:53 PM
Dealt with them once!
Wolf Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 8:43 PM
Ooh. I'm preparing my defense. Nothing scarier than a horse that flies. lol. ~ gw
Rodrigues Avatar
July 28, 2024 at 5:40 AM
Right?!
Proxenos Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 11:45 AM
Horrid insects that bite and one wonders is it humans that first invented warfare and secretly plan an attack behind closed doors, instead of under blanketed storage, plotting their offense. Wonderful Senryu Kim, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 12:56 PM
ooh…just love when a reader adds to the mystique, what they see in between the lines, under the blanket, behind closed doors. You make my day ~ Kim
Kendrick Avatar
July 26, 2024 at 1:38 PM
I am glad I am not there because their bite is awful. LOL.. Thanks for sharing. Sara K
Rodrigues Avatar
July 26, 2024 at 3:41 PM
Few years back. Not ours but left at our house.
One Avatar
July 26, 2024 at 12:30 PM
Great arrangement of words.. an excellent senryu..
Rodrigues Avatar
July 26, 2024 at 3:41 PM
Thank you, Silent!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
July 26, 2024 at 11:47 AM
This I believe exacts Suze's step off that mundane hishway and get lost in Frost, if it be for the contest GL Kim. Aloha William
Rodrigues Avatar
July 26, 2024 at 3:42 PM
Thank you and it is for her contest!
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