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Has Everything Gone Grey

I look around me and all I see are colors but wonder if they matter at all for I see the color of all of these wonders but still cant afford to call so I have to ask has color mattered since the day I was born or is the grey just a color that seems to have splattered the color of bleeding the norm it sounds like everything and yet tastes of none opposites blending under the sun a Mexican standoff between all the colors but only the grey would run it sounds of the freeway and jackhammers at work without any leeway or quarks its unmitigated and yet agitated but the grey will still leave its marks its the beginning of every and the end of all mixed all together in one it can pick you up then leave you to fall until finally the grey is undone

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Date: 12/12/2013 5:03:00 PM
Creative winning work..Way to go ..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 12/11/2013 8:31:00 AM
a wonderful sound of color. .. Congratulations on the winning poem...Linda
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Date: 12/10/2013 9:57:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Brandon
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Date: 12/10/2013 4:05:00 PM
wow, deep!!! Good one and congrats for your win.
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Date: 12/10/2013 11:34:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in: "THE SOUND OF COLOR" contest: Sponsored by: Monterey Sirak - Nice to join and nice to read your poem again Brandon. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/10/2013 9:21:00 AM
Fantastic interpretations of the sound of gray. You are right, gray is in limbo, neither fully one thing or the other. Congrats and thank you for entering. Somehow I had missed seeing your poetry before now, but I am glad to read your work.
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Date: 11/28/2013 7:32:00 PM
Brandon, glad gray is a color that will fade away into its own mist. Clever write. Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 11/28/2013 9:46:00 AM
Welcome to PS Brandon, Your first poem rocked me, its a master piece..I haven't read poems about this theme am grateful that you wrote about colors..Enjoy our great family here..RR
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Date: 11/28/2013 4:30:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Brandon ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/27/2013 4:52:00 PM
Brandon, I like your first poetic piece on the site , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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