Harvesting of Gems

Deep water divers

           collect slowly cultured gems,

              pearls from dark waters...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Babcock Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 7:02 AM
Nice visual poem Jay . AWESOME. Phyl
Dietrich Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 11:50 PM
This one is really cool. A gem! LUv, Andrea
Gorelick Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 3:35 PM
a beauty here..well done. BG
Sweetheart Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 8:09 AM
Lovely imagery Jay in this gem filled Haiku penned so beautifully.. enjoyed the view this happy Sunday with luv..
Onclaud Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 8:00 AM
oh my... just heavenly, jay! i'm a 'ku lover and this enthrall me..:) hope you enter this in a contest!! :) do you speak filipino?? huggs, nette
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January 23, 2011 at 7:02 AM
Good morning, Jay the adventures one dives in to, just to meet the beauty under the seas.. A sweet and vivid image from your awesome Haiku.. enjoyed your poem,..Linda
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January 23, 2011 at 5:49 AM
There is wonderful surface imagery here of the pearl dives, Jay, but I can feel the spiritual quality of your haiku as well. Very nice! Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 5:41 AM
Wonderful images you have penned in thgis haiku, jay
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