Harvest Reflections

The rustling gold heads
Below a beautiful sky,
Just rattling away.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Kelly Avatar
January 8, 2009 at 2:08 AM
Perfect 5~7~5 Haiku , Raul which captures the moment .... Well done ..
Gass Avatar
November 30, 2008 at 12:37 PM
This is such a lovely poem. It creates such a nice feeling. My best wishes always. Love Robin
Neal Avatar
November 24, 2008 at 3:24 PM
I can imagine the wheatfield you painted with this lovely haiku.
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November 23, 2008 at 1:21 PM
Nice use of imagery and personification in this haiku. Thank you for sharing it with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
Winter Avatar
November 19, 2008 at 6:31 PM
Lovely imagery here. An excellent haiku. Thank you Raul for such a thoughtful comment. Love, Shar
Foulk Avatar
November 19, 2008 at 2:00 PM
a beautiful piece you wrote, so warm and colorful. Michael Torres asked me to read some of your poetry and you do have some talent, keep writing my friend.
Neal Avatar
November 19, 2008 at 1:23 PM
this is a nice haiku loved the title
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