Harvest

Corn Tall, yellow Growing, ripening, waving Born to be crushed Bread

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/17/2010 4:10:00 AM

Nice use of the cinquain form, Anne. You give us a vivid image of the harvest grain. Love, Carolyn

Brian Strand

Date: 10/22/2009 11:52:00 PM

Fine harevest poetry Anne.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.A lanterne is a half American cinquain in form.

James Fraser

Date: 10/20/2009 11:57:00 AM

Words well worth reaping Ann, nice read >> James

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/15/2009 4:09:00 PM

Nicely done very descriptive. Keep writing. Sara

Geoffery Mchugh

Date: 10/15/2009 12:23:00 PM

I dig the poem, Anne.

Marty Owens

Date: 10/15/2009 6:34:00 AM

Love this..Enjoyed...Marty

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/15/2009 3:31:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Anne. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol