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11/04/23

One bad apple fell to the ground, I guess it’s just rotten to the core

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Date: 11/4/2023 7:32:00 AM
- ... don't eat it ... :) - Have a wonderful weekend, Jan :) - hugs
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Date: 11/4/2023 5:56:00 AM
Jan, a great poem, there are several bad apples that need to fall to the ground.
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Date: 11/4/2023 2:58:00 AM
Lol… it’s been a while since I read one of your works, and I enjoyed it as usual!
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Date: 11/4/2023 12:16:00 AM
Perfect Monoku. There are many rotten apples around. Precise Monoku. Blessings.
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Date: 11/3/2023 7:08:00 PM
One bad apple is all it takes to rot the whole crop. Sounds familiar like something I recently wrote.
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Date: 11/3/2023 7:12:00 PM
So true Lin hugs jan xx

Book: Shattered Sighs