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Harsh Reality

As I abandon the world of metaphysics, i begin to be sick and melancholic. As I join the nature as if it were a voice, I sing with the birds, a song of rejoice. As I become unresponsive to worldly desires and decided to be one who's willing to abide, It killed me, you routine! if I am to cling to something, it is life, not my welfare.

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Date: 12/16/2024 5:53:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 3/23/2016 12:15:00 PM
Leo, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/16/2016 4:23:00 PM
Leo, enjoyed reading the words you poured on your poem. Have a wonderful day. **SKAT **
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Date: 11/2/2014 6:47:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Liane - I choose your very well written poem - I like it - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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