Terry Flood Poet Rhyme

Harry the Heathen Haddock

[A couple… ONLY TWO?… of you have wondered about my recent absence from Soup. I’m on a personal challenge to write 52 poems for kiddies… maybe, only maybe, to put a booklet together. My mind doesn’t naturally do ‘kiddy think’ so it’s stretching me a bit.

This little ode, I felt was too grown up for kiddies, but I rather like it so I thought I’d share it with you lot ;-)   ]




Harry the haddock swam proud in the sea
He said there is no fish that looks down on me
I told him of one and he looked at me odd
And said I’m not sure that there’s really a Cod

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Rico Leffanta April 15, 2022 at 11:26 AM Cod-awful close! Aloha! Terry Flood April 16, 2022 at 3:11 PM Hi, Rico. I actually like this tge more I read it… just wasn’t sure a child would get it. Cheers bud.

Deb M April 14, 2022 at 4:20 PM I am so glad to see you back Terry!! Are you staying?? Such a cute poem! Debx Deb M April 14, 2022 at 5:02 PM Well good luck with your project completion. Debx Terry Flood April 14, 2022 at 4:50 PM Am I staying? Hmmm… my nature is such that I have to finish what I start. I’d read a bad book to the end in case it got better, I’d watch a bad movie right through for the same reason… my kiddie poems are doing my head in… but I just gotta finish them. Only then will my brain let me think anew. So I will be back, I hope it’s soon. Glad you enjoyed this one, Deb. Terry x Terry Flood April 14, 2022 at 4:44 PM Posted this in response to your and Angela’s enquiries. One of a few that seemed slightly too mature for kiddies. Good job really… otherwise I’d have to draw a haddock! Ha ha… Terry

Tom Cunningham April 14, 2022 at 2:34 PM Lol a fishy tail, you've been missed Terry, glad everything is well with you. Tom Terry Flood April 14, 2022 at 4:38 PM Just between you and me and the gatepost, Tom, I find myself wondering if sitting back and watching a slaughter is sapping my humour… is it? I don’t know… but not much seems funny right now. Is my ‘project’ an escape? I don’t know. I suspect that a bullet hole in Putin’s head would flick my funny switch… here’s hoping. I am well and I am engrossed in ‘stuff’ but sooner or later I’ll get the ‘funny’ back… you have been warned! Cheers. Terry

Gary Radice April 14, 2022 at 1:02 PM Pardon the pun Terry but..Brill! :) Harry's Highway Cod. Love it! Great work Terry! :) Cheers - Gary Terry Flood April 14, 2022 at 4:29 PM Glad you liked this, Gary. Trying to second guess a child’s mind isn’t my forte, but this kinda tickled me. Cheers. Terry