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Harmonious Flow Cl

On paths of frozen ice and snow
With bitter cold air all around
I just seek to know, where to go
To make it work with what I found

To walk quiet, without a sound
Of cracking ice and things I know
Snow piled in burdens by the pound
Waiting for harmonious flow

1/21/20

Entry for Oh-no A Twisted Char-Lay Poetry Contest.  Sponsor:  Charles Messina

Copyright © Heidi Sands | Year Posted 2020

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John Watt Date: 2/16/2020 7:05:00 PM A lovely wintertime write, Heidi. Don't forget your warm mittens! Congrats on your win ~ John Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 2/17/2020 8:53:00 AM Thank you John :) Yes, I must remember my warm mittens !

Gershon Wolf Date: 2/16/2020 4:47:00 PM While waiting for 'harmonious flow,' you'd already created it with this prize-winning poem. Congrats, Heidi. :) gw Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 2/16/2020 5:03:00 PM Thank you so much, Gershon. I am happy to hear that :)

Charles Messina Date: 2/16/2020 1:31:00 PM A gorgeous write, Heidi. This flows so well...Congratulations on your win! Charlie Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 2/16/2020 2:20:00 PM Thank you very much Charlie. I appreciate the opportunity and your kind feedback :)

Charlie Knowlton Date: 2/15/2020 9:57:00 AM I like your poem Heidi. And it is bitter cold right now. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 2/15/2020 10:13:00 AM I am happy you like it. ..thank you. And it is bitter cold here right now too! Stay warm :)

M. L. Kiser Date: 1/29/2020 10:50:00 AM Beautifully done, good luck in the contest. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/29/2020 11:40:00 AM Thank you for your support. Have a nice day today :)

Robertina B. Date: 1/25/2020 8:29:00 AM Really enjoyed your Splendid write, Heidi.. So inspirational! As always your talent shines, dear Poetess.. Have a blessed day! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/25/2020 9:38:00 AM I am happy that you find this to be inspirational. Thank you for your visit and your kindness Robertina. I also hope you have a blessed day :)

Edward Ibeh Date: 1/24/2020 1:13:00 PM Beautiful poetry, Heidi:-) Thoroughly enjoyed! GL on Charles' contest! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/24/2020 1:19:00 PM I am happy you enjoyed this. Thank you Edward :)

Panagiota Romios Date: 1/22/2020 1:22:00 PM Heidi..this is gorgeous... My best thought for a win. PanagiotaXUX Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/22/2020 3:07:00 PM Oh, thank you so much Panagiota. I appreciate your support. :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 1/22/2020 6:54:00 AM No reason to wait for " harmonious flow" for it runs throughout your poem dearest, Heidi! Hugs xxx Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/22/2020 8:13:00 AM That is kind of you to say Demetrios. Thank you very much :)

Daniel Turner Date: 1/21/2020 11:13:00 PM Ah yes, a metaphor of life. Problems seem to always find a way of working themselves out. Nice to read you again my dear:) Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/22/2020 8:12:00 AM Nice to see you again DT. How are you? I hope all is well and your New Year is a great one ! Thank you for your visit and comment :)

Gershon Wolf Date: 1/21/2020 7:02:00 PM Nothing like the zone (perhaps zen?!) of that harmonious flow. Can't be rushed. Has to come to you. Nicely done, Heidi! Warm wishes, Gershon Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/22/2020 8:12:00 AM Thank you very much Gershon :)

Midnight Aurora Date: 1/21/2020 4:54:00 PM This poem is pure essence of "harmonious flow". It's very beautiful and tranquil. Your imagery really sets the scene and the rhyme pulls you in further. Really like this one! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/22/2020 8:11:00 AM Thank you very much for your kind feedback :) Have a great day!

Paul Callus Date: 1/21/2020 4:54:00 PM Yours is a lovely poem to read, Heidi, I can just picture it. We never get any snow here! Regards // paul Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/22/2020 8:11:00 AM Thank you Paul. I am happy to see your comment. Wow, no snow where you are! I hope you have a nice day :)

Charlie Smith Date: 1/21/2020 4:43:00 PM Hi Heidi, good one my friend, best wishes... Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/22/2020 8:10:00 AM Thank you very much Charlie. Nice to see you and happy New Year ! :)

Tom Cunningham Date: 1/21/2020 2:33:00 PM Love your winter image Heidi, only rain here at the moment. Good luck Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/21/2020 3:29:00 PM Thank you Tom. I am happy to hear that. Stay dry, my friend! :)

Silent One Date: 1/21/2020 1:09:00 PM Great imagery... Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/21/2020 2:03:00 PM Thank you Silent One :)

Chris Green Date: 1/21/2020 12:31:00 PM Beautifully done my friend. This paint a wonderful winter scene. Best wishes in the contest Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/21/2020 12:40:00 PM Thank you Chris. I appreciate your kind comment and support :)

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/21/2020 12:27:00 PM - A beautiful paths with blanket of snow and ice - Walk gently, Heidi :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/21/2020 12:39:00 PM Thank you very much Anne-Lise. Ok, I will :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 1/21/2020 12:14:00 PM Well written Heidi--those rhymes are not easy. You captured beautifully --the hush of the day in bitter cold. Lovely imagery. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/21/2020 12:39:00 PM Thank you Vijay. I appreciate your kind feedback :)