Heidi Sands Poet Lay

Harmonious Flow Cl

On paths of frozen ice and snow
With bitter cold air all around
I just seek to know, where to go
To make it work with what I found

To walk quiet, without a sound
Of cracking ice and things I know
Snow piled in burdens by the pound
Waiting for harmonious flow

1/21/20

Entry for Oh-no A Twisted Char-Lay Poetry Contest.  Sponsor:  Charles Messina

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John Watt February 16, 2020 at 7:05 PM A lovely wintertime write, Heidi. Don't forget your warm mittens! Congrats on your win ~ John Heidi Sands February 17, 2020 at 8:53 AM Thank you John :) Yes, I must remember my warm mittens !

Gershon Wolf February 16, 2020 at 4:47 PM While waiting for 'harmonious flow,' you'd already created it with this prize-winning poem. Congrats, Heidi. :) gw Heidi Sands February 16, 2020 at 5:03 PM Thank you so much, Gershon. I am happy to hear that :)

Charles Messina February 16, 2020 at 1:31 PM A gorgeous write, Heidi. This flows so well...Congratulations on your win! Charlie Heidi Sands February 16, 2020 at 2:20 PM Thank you very much Charlie. I appreciate the opportunity and your kind feedback :)

Charlie Knowlton February 15, 2020 at 9:57 AM I like your poem Heidi. And it is bitter cold right now. Heidi Sands February 15, 2020 at 10:13 AM I am happy you like it. ..thank you. And it is bitter cold here right now too! Stay warm :)

M. L. Kiser January 29, 2020 at 10:50 AM Beautifully done, good luck in the contest. Heidi Sands January 29, 2020 at 11:40 AM Thank you for your support. Have a nice day today :)

Robertina B. January 25, 2020 at 8:29 AM Really enjoyed your Splendid write, Heidi.. So inspirational! As always your talent shines, dear Poetess.. Have a blessed day! Heidi Sands January 25, 2020 at 9:38 AM I am happy that you find this to be inspirational. Thank you for your visit and your kindness Robertina. I also hope you have a blessed day :)

Edward Ibeh January 24, 2020 at 1:13 PM Beautiful poetry, Heidi:-) Thoroughly enjoyed! GL on Charles' contest! Heidi Sands January 24, 2020 at 1:19 PM I am happy you enjoyed this. Thank you Edward :)

Panagiota Romios January 22, 2020 at 1:22 PM Heidi..this is gorgeous... My best thought for a win. PanagiotaXUX Heidi Sands January 22, 2020 at 3:07 PM Oh, thank you so much Panagiota. I appreciate your support. :)

Demetrios Trifiatis January 22, 2020 at 6:54 AM No reason to wait for " harmonious flow" for it runs throughout your poem dearest, Heidi! Hugs xxx Heidi Sands January 22, 2020 at 8:13 AM That is kind of you to say Demetrios. Thank you very much :)

Daniel Turner January 21, 2020 at 11:13 PM Ah yes, a metaphor of life. Problems seem to always find a way of working themselves out. Nice to read you again my dear:) Heidi Sands January 22, 2020 at 8:12 AM Nice to see you again DT. How are you? I hope all is well and your New Year is a great one ! Thank you for your visit and comment :)

Gershon Wolf January 21, 2020 at 7:02 PM Nothing like the zone (perhaps zen?!) of that harmonious flow. Can't be rushed. Has to come to you. Nicely done, Heidi! Warm wishes, Gershon Heidi Sands January 22, 2020 at 8:12 AM Thank you very much Gershon :)

Midnight Aurora January 21, 2020 at 4:54 PM This poem is pure essence of "harmonious flow". It's very beautiful and tranquil. Your imagery really sets the scene and the rhyme pulls you in further. Really like this one! Heidi Sands January 22, 2020 at 8:11 AM Thank you very much for your kind feedback :) Have a great day!

Paul Callus January 21, 2020 at 4:54 PM Yours is a lovely poem to read, Heidi, I can just picture it. We never get any snow here! Regards // paul Heidi Sands January 22, 2020 at 8:11 AM Thank you Paul. I am happy to see your comment. Wow, no snow where you are! I hope you have a nice day :)

Charlie Smith January 21, 2020 at 4:43 PM Hi Heidi, good one my friend, best wishes... Heidi Sands January 22, 2020 at 8:10 AM Thank you very much Charlie. Nice to see you and happy New Year ! :)

Tom Cunningham January 21, 2020 at 2:33 PM Love your winter image Heidi, only rain here at the moment. Good luck Heidi Sands January 21, 2020 at 3:29 PM Thank you Tom. I am happy to hear that. Stay dry, my friend! :)

Silent One January 21, 2020 at 1:09 PM Great imagery... Heidi Sands January 21, 2020 at 2:03 PM Thank you Silent One :)

Chris Green January 21, 2020 at 12:31 PM Beautifully done my friend. This paint a wonderful winter scene. Best wishes in the contest Heidi Sands January 21, 2020 at 12:40 PM Thank you Chris. I appreciate your kind comment and support :)

Anne-Lise Andresen January 21, 2020 at 12:27 PM - A beautiful paths with blanket of snow and ice - Walk gently, Heidi :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Heidi Sands January 21, 2020 at 12:39 PM Thank you very much Anne-Lise. Ok, I will :)

Vijay Pandit January 21, 2020 at 12:14 PM Well written Heidi--those rhymes are not easy. You captured beautifully --the hush of the day in bitter cold. Lovely imagery. Heidi Sands January 21, 2020 at 12:39 PM Thank you Vijay. I appreciate your kind feedback :)