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Harmonious Flow Cl

On paths of frozen ice and snow With bitter cold air all around I just seek to know, where to go To make it work with what I found To walk quiet, without a sound Of cracking ice and things I know Snow piled in burdens by the pound Waiting for harmonious flow 1/21/20 Entry for Oh-no A Twisted Char-Lay Poetry Contest. Sponsor: Charles Messina

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John Watt

Date: 2/16/2020 7:05:00 PM

A lovely wintertime write, Heidi. Don't forget your warm mittens! Congrats on your win ~ John

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/17/2020 8:53:00 AM

Thank you John :) Yes, I must remember my warm mittens !

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/16/2020 4:47:00 PM

While waiting for 'harmonious flow,' you'd already created it with this prize-winning poem. Congrats, Heidi. :) gw

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/16/2020 5:03:00 PM

Thank you so much, Gershon. I am happy to hear that :)

Charles Messina

Date: 2/16/2020 1:31:00 PM

A gorgeous write, Heidi. This flows so well...Congratulations on your win! Charlie

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/16/2020 2:20:00 PM

Thank you very much Charlie. I appreciate the opportunity and your kind feedback :)

Charlie Knowlton

Date: 2/15/2020 9:57:00 AM

I like your poem Heidi. And it is bitter cold right now.

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/15/2020 10:13:00 AM

I am happy you like it. ..thank you. And it is bitter cold here right now too! Stay warm :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/29/2020 10:50:00 AM

Beautifully done, good luck in the contest.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/29/2020 11:40:00 AM

Thank you for your support. Have a nice day today :)

Robertina B.

Date: 1/25/2020 8:29:00 AM

Really enjoyed your Splendid write, Heidi.. So inspirational! As always your talent shines, dear Poetess.. Have a blessed day!

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/25/2020 9:38:00 AM

I am happy that you find this to be inspirational. Thank you for your visit and your kindness Robertina. I also hope you have a blessed day :)

Edward Ibeh

Date: 1/24/2020 1:13:00 PM

Beautiful poetry, Heidi:-) Thoroughly enjoyed! GL on Charles' contest!

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/24/2020 1:19:00 PM

I am happy you enjoyed this. Thank you Edward :)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 1/22/2020 1:22:00 PM

Heidi..this is gorgeous... My best thought for a win. PanagiotaXUX

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/22/2020 3:07:00 PM

Oh, thank you so much Panagiota. I appreciate your support. :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/22/2020 6:54:00 AM

No reason to wait for " harmonious flow" for it runs throughout your poem dearest, Heidi! Hugs xxx

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/22/2020 8:13:00 AM

That is kind of you to say Demetrios. Thank you very much :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 1/21/2020 11:13:00 PM

Ah yes, a metaphor of life. Problems seem to always find a way of working themselves out. Nice to read you again my dear:)

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/22/2020 8:12:00 AM

Nice to see you again DT. How are you? I hope all is well and your New Year is a great one ! Thank you for your visit and comment :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/21/2020 7:02:00 PM

Nothing like the zone (perhaps zen?!) of that harmonious flow. Can't be rushed. Has to come to you. Nicely done, Heidi! Warm wishes, Gershon

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/22/2020 8:12:00 AM

Thank you very much Gershon :)

Midnight Aurora

Date: 1/21/2020 4:54:00 PM

This poem is pure essence of "harmonious flow". It's very beautiful and tranquil. Your imagery really sets the scene and the rhyme pulls you in further. Really like this one!

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/22/2020 8:11:00 AM

Thank you very much for your kind feedback :) Have a great day!