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Hark Have You Heard

We cannot see the rays of the sun yet its shadows,shadow everyone We cannot see the wind blowing free yet we hear the rustling of a tree We cannot know how the Spirit moves for with earthly eyes,we cannot see &yet in thought,the truth, He speaks to me. | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 9/14/2021 2:48:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... through your poetic expression and lay-out. God bless you
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Brian Strand
Date: 9/14/2021 3:09:00 AM
Yes Beata,format is the key to poetic expression,especially aloud
Date: 9/13/2021 7:04:00 AM
I love the ideas behind this work Brian. I've been looking at using words in poems that function as they sound..Shadows shadow (as per your poem)...Hoovers hoover (brand name I know but..) and scarecrows scare crows etc etc..I'm just not there yet. Anyway: a great 11 year old rhyme Cheers - Gary
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Brian Strand
Date: 9/13/2021 7:33:00 AM
Interesting idea Gary,I'lll watch your space

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