Hard To Swallow

HARD TO SWALLOW
Last summer I bought an ice cream But although the taste was supreme While eating my cornet I swallowed a hornet When I think about it I scream
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kendrick Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 12:15 PM
Congratulations on this winning work in the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us. Sara
Merryman Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 6:32 PM
Ouch! Congrats on your win, Bryn! Blessings, Kim M
Kitchin Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 4:49 PM
Bryn. congratulations on your winning placement, a great limerick, hope it's fiction!
Strudwick Avatar
July 24, 2023 at 12:20 AM
Thanks Tania. It did actually happen to my late brother about 75 years ago although it was a wasp rather than a hornet. Happily he survived for another 70 years or so
Goyal Avatar
July 15, 2023 at 7:25 PM
This is funny, great play of word
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