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Hard To Swallow

HARD TO SWALLOW
Last summer I bought an ice cream But although the taste was supreme While eating my cornet I swallowed a hornet When I think about it I scream

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Date: 7/23/2023 12:15:00 PM
Congratulations on this winning work in the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us. Sara
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Date: 7/22/2023 6:32:00 PM
Ouch! Congrats on your win, Bryn! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 7/22/2023 4:49:00 PM
Bryn. congratulations on your winning placement, a great limerick, hope it's fiction!
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Bryn Strudwick
Date: 7/24/2023 12:20:00 AM
Thanks Tania. It did actually happen to my late brother about 75 years ago although it was a wasp rather than a hornet. Happily he survived for another 70 years or so
Date: 7/15/2023 7:25:00 PM
This is funny, great play of word
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