Hard Rain

the rain falls so hard

   bouncing when hitting the ground

       as loud as thunder
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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April 2, 2012 at 10:06 PM
This haiku reminded me of Ray Bradbury's short story "The Long Rain". It is as descriptive as any quality write.
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