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Hard Life, Well Spent

Cowboys herdin’ cattle cross dusty trails Sandy hooves paint ground fog in their wake Shuffling along swattin’ flies off molty hides Riders amble aside keeping eye on their stake Chuck wagon camps, setting up by a creek Beans and pan bread cookin’ over hot stones Coffee’s meandering aroma penetrates the air Greeting men carrying saddles over tired bones Ranch hands scout the waters nearby Look to the sky to judge the night Storms a comin’ as night encroaches Coyotes restless, cries rent last light Cattle dogs alert to changes Nip the heels of stragglin’ calves Cowhand slaps his rope while coaxing Blistered hands and lips in need of salves Cowhands sing to calm their charges Bedrolls gathered near the fire Dreaming of a trail once taken And of their loves as they retire

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/5/2012 11:21:00 AM
hi Lena, i just want to say thanks for your work. It is uniquic, There are words and then there are lyric's, I rated Hard Life, Well Spent a 5. But for "The brine, it is calling" i rate a 7+. 7, i think is the best? I love it! Its like we listen to the same music or dream the same dream or are just the same species. IDONO? but i related to it and deffently felt a connection, Don't stop, "peace"
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Date: 3/29/2012 2:35:00 AM
You must have riddin' the trail. Great detail. By the way, I appreciated your critique of my poem "Paper dreams" three years ago. I received many superficial congrats, but your comments were meaningful. You're a good poet, I'll try to read more of your work.
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Lena Pate
Date: 3/29/2012 9:35:00 PM
Thank you Randall. Husband and I raised horses and cows for several years. Love horses. If you liked this one read my Cathedral Spiritual.
Date: 1/4/2012 11:15:00 AM
Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Lena. Love, Carol
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Lena Pate
Date: 1/6/2012 6:22:00 PM
Thanks Carol.
Date: 9/12/2011 9:42:00 AM
Congratulations Lena on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/4/2011 2:39:00 PM
Great poem Lena, reminds me of the John Wayne film Red River. thank you for reading and commenting on my poem. Peace!!!
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