Hard Deal

To be me Is sometimes a hard deal I feel too much From a lonelyness deep within me A crime inside I don't want to know As the inner questions dont stop following The answers travel round On minute all is so sound then nothing found To be me Is sometimes a hard deal

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James Fraser

Date: 8/27/2010 11:07:00 AM

You will be you again Sarah, radiant and full of life >> James

John Rhinem

Date: 8/17/2010 10:16:00 AM

~ Whenever & wherever that may someday be; "Dreams," wrapped in love & hope; giving us strength to forever carry on ~ I can feel Your Precious Soul Here Dear Sarah and, it is very beautiful as I have come to know so, Never give up on tomorrow and keep pouring Your Beauty upon the pages! "Much Love & Warmth to You Always, & All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Beautiful Day Priceless Sarah, &, 'Smile Your Precious Smile;'" Bye Dear Lady!:) ~

John Rhinem

Date: 8/17/2010 9:59:00 AM

Smile? ~ Hello dear precious Sarah Hales! Hope You are doing well today dear and, "Thank You" for stopping by yes.! I believe its sadly often hard for many to be themselves sometimes and yet, we all hold our own reasons as to why? I believe personally, if we do the best which we can, to love and to look towards love, we will eventually find ourselves amid such a wonderous state and place ~ ....Cont:)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/16/2010 6:22:00 PM

Nice inner thoughts well expressed, sarah

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/16/2010 2:36:00 PM

Sarah, I feel the truth and deepness we all want to ignore the bad things and feelings..How about me and my shameful crimes. It is a hard deal to be me..How I do it I don't know,..p.d.