Hard Deal

To be me 
Is sometimes a hard deal 

I feel too much 
From a lonelyness deep within me 

A crime inside I don't want to know 
As the inner questions dont stop following

The answers travel round 
On minute all is so sound then nothing found 

To be me 
Is sometimes a hard deal
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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August 27, 2010 at 11:07 AM
You will be you again Sarah, radiant and full of life >> James
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August 17, 2010 at 10:16 AM
~ Whenever & wherever that may someday be; "Dreams," wrapped in love & hope; giving us strength to forever carry on ~ I can feel Your Precious Soul Here Dear Sarah and, it is very beautiful as I have come to know so, Never give up on tomorrow and keep pouring Your Beauty upon the pages! "Much Love & Warmth to You Always, & All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Beautiful Day Priceless Sarah, &, 'Smile Your Precious Smile;'" Bye Dear Lady!:) ~
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August 17, 2010 at 9:59 AM
Smile? ~ Hello dear precious Sarah Hales! Hope You are doing well today dear and, "Thank You" for stopping by yes.! I believe its sadly often hard for many to be themselves sometimes and yet, we all hold our own reasons as to why? I believe personally, if we do the best which we can, to love and to look towards love, we will eventually find ourselves amid such a wonderous state and place ~ ....Cont:)
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August 16, 2010 at 6:22 PM
Nice inner thoughts well expressed, sarah
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August 16, 2010 at 2:36 PM
Sarah, I feel the truth and deepness we all want to ignore the bad things and feelings..How about me and my shameful crimes. It is a hard deal to be me..How I do it I don't know,..p.d.
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