Harbouring the Life

HARBOURING THE LIFE
The lone pole star shines stationary in the seamless sky for the ancient mariner to sail safe in the unknown sea, to return home with dreams sparkling in steadfast glow in the mind, resolute to reach the shore not yet in sight to anchor the floating life in the harbour of fulfillment.
June 15, 2018
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Gentry Avatar
June 21, 2018 at 5:04 PM
Congratulations on your top win with this thought-provoking poem, all in 5 lines. Amazing!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 1:20 AM
Thank you, Susan.
Dietrich Avatar
June 19, 2018 at 3:20 PM
oh I love that ending, the harbor of fulfillment. So nice!! Congrats for your win
Sinha-Roy Avatar
June 20, 2018 at 11:30 PM
Thank you, Andrea.
Devonshire Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 2:02 PM
Deep and provocative, Subimal. The reference to "The Ancient Mariner" really drew me in. Congratulations on your top spot! Hugs, Carolyn
Sinha-Roy Avatar
June 19, 2018 at 5:03 AM
Thank you, Carolyn for your visit, and for your nice comment.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 9:07 AM
Congratulations on your top win Subimal! xomo :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
June 19, 2018 at 5:02 AM
Many thanks, Maureen.
Andresen Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 12:36 PM
- I visit your poem Subimal, with congratulations and a hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 5:08 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise for your visit and for liking the poem.
Sietesantos Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 11:38 AM
Congratulations on a big win - excellent write! Hugs. Pandita
Sinha-Roy Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 5:07 AM
Thank you, Pandita for your visit and comment.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 10:35 AM
Wonderful imagery! Congrats, Subimal on first place!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 5:07 AM
Thank you, Kim.
Pett Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 7:04 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Subimal, so well written. :))
Sinha-Roy Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 5:07 AM
Thank you, Roy.
One Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 6:19 AM
This one is really deep, with a profound message.. Great imagery Subimal... I hope we all reach home to harbour a life of fulfilment.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
Sinha-Roy Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 5:07 AM
Thank you so much, Silent One for your nice comments and placing the poem.
Sands Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 6:00 AM
Very nice Subimal :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 5:06 AM
Thank you, Heidi.
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