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Harbour Lights

Beside the harbour lights, I sit and glance at the sailing ships silhouetted against the sangria sky. I cast a silent sigh as I savour the sultry scent of the cerulean sea, reminiscing~ the first and last forehead kiss here~ beside the harbour lights. 7/19/2020 1st Place STRAND COMPLETELY NEW (11)any theme any form Contest Judged: 7/19/2020 12:00:00 AM Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 8/30/2020 4:10:00 AM
What a fantastic little poem...compact and energised. Has a marvellous after-taste like a finest quality sherry: rich and appealing. Loved it! My very best wishes J.C. :) john
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Date: 8/1/2020 6:21:00 PM
This is a beauty...loved the words together...sultry scent
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Date: 7/23/2020 4:30:00 PM
An amazing piece JCB! Congratulations on your wonderful first placement! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 7/23/2020 2:07:00 AM
A lovely picture painted in words that captures so well your thoughts and a moment in time. I love that word 'cerulean' to describe the sea's colour.
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Date: 7/21/2020 11:26:00 PM
Congratulations. This is melodic.
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Date: 7/19/2020 7:34:00 PM
Very 'deja-vu-ish!' The feel of it lingers long. Lovely penned, JCB! Joy Forever, Gershon
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Date: 7/19/2020 6:51:00 PM
Beautiful alliteration flowing through your tender memory! Congratulations on your top first place. This is lovely, JCB!
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Date: 7/19/2020 4:00:00 PM
ahhhh, this poem elicits a sigh! Love your style!!
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Date: 7/19/2020 7:00:00 AM
You created a perfect memory, JCB--delightful, recall.
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