JC Brul Poet Free verse

Harbour Lights

Beside the harbour lights,
I sit and glance
at the sailing ships silhouetted
against the sangria sky.

I cast a silent sigh
as I savour
the sultry scent
of the cerulean sea,
reminiscing~
the first and last
forehead kiss
here~
beside the harbour lights.



7/19/2020

1st Place 
STRAND COMPLETELY NEW (11)any theme any form
Contest Judged:  7/19/2020 12:00:00 AM
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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John Fleming August 30, 2020 at 4:10 AM What a fantastic little poem...compact and energised. Has a marvellous after-taste like a finest quality sherry: rich and appealing. Loved it! My very best wishes J.C. :) john

Jeanne Mcgee August 1, 2020 at 6:21 PM This is a beauty...loved the words together...sultry scent

Connie Marcum Wong July 23, 2020 at 4:30 PM An amazing piece JCB! Congratulations on your wonderful first placement! Blessings xxoo

Gary Radice July 23, 2020 at 2:07 AM A lovely picture painted in words that captures so well your thoughts and a moment in time. I love that word 'cerulean' to describe the sea's colour.

Caren Krutsinger July 21, 2020 at 11:26 PM Congratulations. This is melodic.

Gershon Wolf July 19, 2020 at 7:34 PM Very 'deja-vu-ish!' The feel of it lingers long. Lovely penned, JCB! Joy Forever, Gershon

Sam Kauffman July 19, 2020 at 6:51 PM Beautiful alliteration flowing through your tender memory! Congratulations on your top first place. This is lovely, JCB!

Andrea Dietrich July 19, 2020 at 4:00 PM ahhhh, this poem elicits a sigh! Love your style!!

Vijay Pandit July 19, 2020 at 7:00 AM You created a perfect memory, JCB--delightful, recall.