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Harboring Dreams Beneath the Surface

~ Silence, on waves of our tide motioned heartbeats, cascading rhythms, a smooth metronome Keeping this time inside blue water passions, beneath the surface, the feelings we’ve grown Hidden so deep in the swells of affection, swimming the shores of a long summer’s night Building a fortress of seashell laced castles, sand dollar curtains to fend off the light Running for cover as sunrise now beckons, placing our smiles where the seas cannot gaze Whispering secrets of coast line devotion, harboring dreams till the end of our days Lighthouse lit beacons now search as a witness, beaches a’ shimmer of moon glow above Hoisting our anchor, we share the horizons, sailing these oceans, professing our love ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 9/19/2019 3:36:00 PM
This is just perfect. I like the seashell laced castles and sand dollar curtains too! Special , Chris :)
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Chris Green
Date: 9/19/2019 3:41:00 PM
Thank you so very much my friend. It does sound like an interesting decorating idea, doesn't it? : ) I appreciate you Heidi.
Date: 9/19/2019 8:35:00 AM
Ok now all I can do is SIGH! Well I must say the next best thing to waking up to having potd is reading your wonderful words! So beautifully written!;)
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Chris Green
Date: 9/19/2019 9:12:00 AM
yeah, I saw that...congrats again on your honor. Thank you for your kind words to me, receiving them is a grand prize for me as well.
Date: 9/18/2019 11:36:00 PM
Loved all of this, but especially the last couplet ~ so beautiful :)
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Chris Green
Date: 9/19/2019 7:50:00 AM
Thank you so much my friend for your always wonderful comments on my poetry.
Date: 9/18/2019 9:52:00 PM
Your words are like a light house a beacon on hope for the rest of us, xo
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Chris Green
Date: 9/19/2019 7:50:00 AM
What a nice thing to say. Thank you so much my friend.
Date: 9/18/2019 7:06:00 PM
This is quite beautiful and I'm glad you shared it here. Blessings to you and happy writing.
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Chris Green
Date: 9/19/2019 7:49:00 AM
Thank you so very much Regina for your kind words.
Date: 9/18/2019 7:03:00 PM
I just knew i would come here tonight and find a gem waiting to be read...your words always bring the scene to life, i love the ocean and the way you painted this one is divine my friend...your poetry never disappoints! Simply gorgeous! :) hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 9/19/2019 7:49:00 AM
Thank you Sandy. Your comments are like little gifts waiting for me to find them so I can smile for the rest of the day. I am so happy you stopped by and enjoyed this one so much.
Date: 9/18/2019 6:51:00 PM
Oh, I love your poetry skills and this poem is yet another reason why. Each line is so beautifully imagery rich that I've gotten a full poetry fix but still wish to read at least another by you (could read you all day if time allowed.) Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Chris Green
Date: 9/19/2019 7:48:00 AM
Thank you so much CayCay for always being so kind to me. Your wonderful comments always make my mornings shine.

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