Notes About The Poem

Harbor of a Sentinel

A tempest of brute force whips the coastline
Where boats and seafarers howl for dire plea; 
Unshaken, I guard with strength to disarm
The lash of tide’s wrath… my tower, a marquee.

Though brazen crests dart like slithering mesh
As Night Keeper, rays glint to face storm’s dare
Protecting tender lives, their hopes on  edge
Upon roughened waves, my lights flash, “Beware!”  

Infusing more ardor till an onrush calms
Heaven’s stars glitter while ships haul the net;
Where from the ridge, my safe harbor appears
On easel of bright air, a task well met! 


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Contest: Eve Roper’s Sentinel Quatrain
4/14/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Devnath  Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 11:15 AM
Congrats on your win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Davey Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 4:58 AM
Very descriptive setting, congrats on your win
Turner Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 7:11 PM
Congratulations nette on you your top placement in the contest. Excellent interpretation. Peace pretty lady:)
Andresen Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 12:58 PM
- Powerful like the ocean waves, Nette - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Vaso Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 11:10 PM
Those prose are two things, the perfect painting and the perfect poem, yes I envision the painting in my mind when I read this, and the photo you choose is also so very good!
Nance Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 7:06 PM
The purpose of the protector, powerful with pride, your uniqueness with language keeps the reader intrigued and delighted with descriptions.
Kendrick Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 5:10 PM
Reads like a winner..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Each person's poem about the same picture is so different such a varied contest..Sara
Gonza Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 4:43 PM
A different style from you through this emblazoned poem--one that lyrically treads on personification with such agility of words and compelling imagery and rhyme!
Dietrich Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 4:10 PM
the poem of mine you saw, with the difficult words in it , was SO hard to do. Good luck with it, Nette! Now I have read your poem. I think you did great. I love how you spoke as if you WERE the lighthouse. that made it different!
Mcdaid Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 4:00 PM
Beautifully painted piece nette wishing you a blessing of a week pal
Allison Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 2:35 PM
such powerful imagery Nette good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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