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Harbingers of Hollow

Harbingers of Hollow 


In my habitual haunting hysteria
I digress to an abandoned area
Voids of dimming dissolving glow
The hermetic harbingers of hollow

Landscapes of secluded shadow
In cathedrals of cacophony grow
A salient soul spiritually spiraled
Within perpetual rags apparelled

My ambient apocalypse of night
Demons joy to my severed sight
Within my chaotic baneful bliss
The kaleidoscope of love I miss

Lost within my secluded shadows
Sleepless in my cumbrous clothes
Living the life of non-existence
Into the path of least resistance.



First submitted Sept.07.2017
Richie Sambora When a blind man cries

June.12.2018
Hollow
Sponsored by: Anthony Slausen

Copyright © Winged Warrior | Year Posted 2018

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Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 7/5/2018 10:41:00 AM Cool alliteration flow in this cerebral offering of pensive introspection, WW. Great poem! Love and best wishes always. Login to Reply

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 6/13/2018 1:20:00 AM Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 6/12/2018 5:57:00 PM You employ an amazing use of alliteration that gives your poem a special quality, WW. There are many beautiful lines, and the last two are WOW. Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn Login to Reply

Agnes Krampe Date: 6/12/2018 5:01:00 PM I spot your signature alliterations, ^WW^ - great depiction. Login to Reply

Heidi Sands Date: 6/12/2018 4:09:00 PM This is a powerful poem and the video too. The ending gives goose bumps. I hope this does well in the contest. Keep up the beautiful writing WW! :) Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 6/12/2018 3:00:00 PM such emptiness beautifully designed, WW... very fine!..huggs Login to Reply

Daniel Turner Date: 6/12/2018 10:12:00 AM Yeah, loneliness sucks! Great write, WW! Love the song and the artist:) Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 6/12/2018 9:50:00 AM The video truly complements your poem..the essence of your poem is well captured in your concluding lines: Living the life of non-existence Into the path of least resistance. A well crafted melancholy poem--best for a win WW. Login to Reply