Winged Warrior Poet Couplet

Harbingers of Hollow

Harbingers of Hollow 


In my habitual haunting hysteria
I digress to an abandoned area
Voids of dimming dissolving glow
The hermetic harbingers of hollow

Landscapes of secluded shadow
In cathedrals of cacophony grow
A salient soul spiritually spiraled
Within perpetual rags apparelled

My ambient apocalypse of night
Demons joy to my severed sight
Within my chaotic baneful bliss
The kaleidoscope of love I miss

Lost within my secluded shadows
Sleepless in my cumbrous clothes
Living the life of non-existence
Into the path of least resistance.



First submitted Sept.07.2017
Richie Sambora When a blind man cries

June.12.2018
Hollow
Sponsored by: Anthony Slausen

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Freddie Robinson Jr. July 5, 2018 at 10:41 AM Cool alliteration flow in this cerebral offering of pensive introspection, WW. Great poem! Love and best wishes always.

Ravi Sathasivam June 13, 2018 at 1:20 AM Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it.

Carolyn Devonshire June 12, 2018 at 5:57 PM You employ an amazing use of alliteration that gives your poem a special quality, WW. There are many beautiful lines, and the last two are WOW. Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn

Agnes Krampe June 12, 2018 at 5:01 PM I spot your signature alliterations, ^WW^ - great depiction.

Heidi Sands June 12, 2018 at 4:09 PM This is a powerful poem and the video too. The ending gives goose bumps. I hope this does well in the contest. Keep up the beautiful writing WW! :)

Nette Onclaud June 12, 2018 at 3:00 PM such emptiness beautifully designed, WW... very fine!..huggs

Daniel Turner June 12, 2018 at 10:12 AM Yeah, loneliness sucks! Great write, WW! Love the song and the artist:)

Vijay Pandit June 12, 2018 at 9:50 AM The video truly complements your poem..the essence of your poem is well captured in your concluding lines: Living the life of non-existence Into the path of least resistance. A well crafted melancholy poem--best for a win WW.