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Happy To Die Without Love

The architechture of love has tore down my design She has destroyed the building of my emotions and the color of the my heart is blackened with time The emptiness over powers my will to live and breathe and the hollow vessels that lead to my broken heart are as calm as a frozen sea The blood that flows through my viens are as cold as liquid ice, giving the reigns to the reaper i'd gladly pay the price

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/31/2011 9:25:00 PM
Powerful verse comes from the heart and your pain is hurting. Healing to come from within over time. Blessings!
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Date: 7/17/2011 4:38:00 PM
I can relate to this piece....Very nicely written and keep up the good work John! :)
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Date: 5/24/2011 5:53:00 PM
I enjoyed this read. I think many have visited the place you were when you wrote this. It's a beautiful expression. ~Beloved Faizah
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Date: 5/23/2011 7:01:00 PM
i understand ur emotions over here...i hope that in due course of time u will be able to heal urself.......u have the strength to standand perform even if ...badly torned! marvellous poem
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Date: 5/20/2011 6:41:00 AM
What a beautiful morning. The sun is finally shining, the birds are singing, and I am sharing my day with you reading your wonderful poetry. I hope you have a great weekend John. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/20/2011 1:24:00 AM
Whoahhh. This lady played a bad number on you...I like the architectural terminology...the writer seems so empty and with nothing left to give at the end...calm as the broken sea....cold as liquid ice..well scribed, sir. just a tid bit--overpowers may need to be one word. Thank you soo much for sharing the overwhelming thots of one's broken heart...I can completely touch the spirit of this poem-many can! Gwendolen
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John Castro
Date: 5/20/2011 1:29:00 AM
lol thanks yeah she hurt me pretty bad

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