Seren Roberts Poet Verse

Happy Infants

The angry sound of rough and
                       raging april tide, as waves anoint
                      the awaiting rocky empty pools, as
                      limpets always clinging on to every
         side, awaiting seagulls, anticipating Crustacean arrival

             Sad eyed donkeys in line each waiting and hoping a
                          happy infant feeds a carrot each
                    
                      Sandcastles are built on the empty
                         beach and knocked  over by a
                gang of senseless idiotic teenagers, already
                   chatting and deftly arranging dates and
                       times  on their own phones, each
                     child of nature easily pleased again.





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Poet Destroyer A March 3, 2013 at 9:18 AM Seren, congratulations with your awesome win..xox~PD Seren Roberts March 3, 2013 at 9:19 AM Thanks PD....Seren

Kash Poet March 3, 2013 at 6:31 AM Seren,Congrarulations on your win!Great poem. Seren Roberts March 3, 2013 at 9:19 AM Thank you Kash, many thanks for the comment ....Seren

Deborah Burch March 3, 2013 at 3:15 AM Lol. Well done Seren. Big congratulations on your win. Big huggs. Deb Seren Roberts March 3, 2013 at 9:20 AM Thank you Deborah ....Seren

Joseph May March 2, 2013 at 5:57 PM congrats on your win Seren Seren Roberts March 2, 2013 at 6:25 PM thanks Joseph

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 2, 2013 at 1:20 PM Well done poppet you did well once more love it star xx Seren Roberts March 2, 2013 at 1:49 PM Thank you Mandy .....Seren

Debbie Guzzi March 2, 2013 at 11:26 AM Congrad's on your winning write.Light & Love Seren Roberts March 2, 2013 at 1:49 PM thank you Debbi...Seren

David Williams March 2, 2013 at 10:23 AM Seren congratulations on your placement in my contest, I hate to see sad donkeys but loved this little journey at the beach, well done...David Seren Roberts March 2, 2013 at 11:25 AM thanks David, I had nearly forgotten about it. Seren

Harry Horsman February 7, 2013 at 7:02 AM your poetry span, especially of time and eras, are very special,, in my mind this paints todays picture.. if i'm wrong still love the poem... Seren Roberts February 7, 2013 at 12:07 PM No your right Harrry, so love away....Seren

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl February 4, 2013 at 10:51 AM Hi love this , very clever .. xx soup Seren Roberts February 4, 2013 at 8:24 PM hi thx Mandy..Seren

Russell Sivey February 3, 2013 at 9:53 PM This is a wonderful and harmonious consonant vowel entry! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this evening! You have superior writing skills, Great Work!! Seren Roberts February 4, 2013 at 8:24 PM Thank you Russell