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Happy In Love

I'm sitting here in my room, holding a photograph of the two of us when we were young in a garden; your arm around my shoulder, mine around your waist, and our little boy standing beside me inspecting a BB gun that is almost as tall as he Happy in Love... It's been a year today and the tears still flow since you left this world, not by choice we were so Happy in Love... you were my Lion, you gave me courage; you were my Bear, you gave me strength I lost you in pieces every day that you were ill. I lie in bed at night trying to catch a moment with you, Happy in Love... but a shadow of your scent on your pillow I miss you more and more every day half of me is missing with you gone, forever. 9/15/2019 - Poetry Contest: Writing Challenge 2, September 2019 - The Photograph Sponsored by: Wiishkobi Ode
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October 14, 2019 at 8:43 AM
Hi Eve, What a moving and touching poem you have penned. It is hard to go on living without someone that you loved dearly, but go on because we know it is what they would want to. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Have a great day- Alexis
Fury Avatar
October 9, 2019 at 1:05 PM
Great poem!
La France Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 5:18 PM
Eve congratulations on your win in my challenge with this excellent poem. It really touched my heart and what a great photo !
Mcgee Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 2:25 PM
I really, really, really love this Eve...you were my Lion, you gave me courage: you were my Bear, you gave me strength...a twist in my heart, your words. Congrats on your top win. a fav.
Ligon Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 4:15 PM
Touching write.
Goldsmith Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 2:41 PM
Love so great and Love so sad. What a great poem. You did a great job. Blessings........
Agustin Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 3:21 AM
Thanks for sharing a part of you through this wonderful piece. God bless you.
Dutta Avatar
September 21, 2019 at 8:08 AM
I am whelmed n charmed. Love.
Ball Avatar
September 17, 2019 at 1:00 PM
What a deeply touching poem my friend. It's so hard to lose someone you love. To watch that strength and beauty that you loved so much slowly fade. My heart and prayers are with you my friend. God Bless, JB
Kitchin Avatar
September 16, 2019 at 6:30 PM
Eve, you wrote a very heartfelt poem, it is full of emotion, and is very touching, I can feel your grief. Hugs
Rees Avatar
September 16, 2019 at 9:49 AM
A half life of then and now. So sad, so inconsolable.Your words will touch the hearts of many.
Vangaveti Avatar
September 16, 2019 at 5:46 AM
What a heart touching poem!! Best wishes for the contest. This is an absolutely fantastic write!!
Mcintosh Avatar
September 16, 2019 at 1:15 AM
This is - so sad, so touching. Best in the contest and blessings
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