Happy Hippy's


                                      large is love abound
                           pigmy sweethearts muddied found~
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Robert Gorelick

June 8, 2025 at 10:45 AM

A beautiful couple, so tender and heart-rending, I like the undulating pattern! Enjoyed besti, Robert

I Am Anaya

June 30, 2025 at 9:31 AM

These haiku + shape are so much fun, addicting Ty!

Duke Beaufort

June 6, 2025 at 11:08 AM

Anaya, very cute. They do look happy. I'm wondering what they are thinking. It would be interesting to be inside their heads for a while. They are likely just trying to survive and thrive. The term "hippys" brings back memories (hippies)! Smiles!!

I Am Anaya

June 6, 2025 at 7:25 PM

They love the muddy rivers, perhaps survival, rhinos horns protect them from the wild beasts . I may have used 'hippos' they have tusks, but they are pretty hippy ~ peace & love

Anne Winter

June 4, 2025 at 7:55 PM

Aww, this melted my heart, so adorable. I love your profile picture! Best, Anne

I Am Anaya

June 5, 2025 at 10:36 AM

Anne, I'm honored, my work is done, my day is validated. A very kind review ~ I like those large straw hats, it's a hot sun here, pic is f a i r l y recent, lol if you're 19 you had been born, this was taken after ;)