Happy Heaven Hermit

A few years ago I was installing carpet in someone's house and a little girl approached me and started asking me questions. A few minutes went by and she had told me that she had a hermit crab that had just died the night before. She had Hermit for 3-1/2 years and she was truly saddened by his death. So on my lunch break I wrote her this poem to cheer her up. Half way through she and her mother started bawling. Thank goodness by the time I was finished they both had smiles. I received two big hugs that day and one great feeling! 

I met a girl named Emily 
She was prettier than gold
 
She had a little hermit crab 
That was almost four years old
 
He came out of his shell one day 
And he said, "It's time to go"

I'm going up to heaven now 
And I thought that you should know
 
I wanted to tell you, Emily 
Because I know how much you care
 
So when you go to bed tonight 
Please say a little prayer
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roper Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 2:21 PM
Congratulations on your win, Charles, great meaningful verse I love the story behind the poem it touched my heart .. Hugs Eve
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March 26, 2018 at 5:05 PM
Hi Eve, Thanks so much for the congrats ! This is always my style of writing. Everything I write has a story behind the poem. In fact, my book is called "Segments-the stories behind the poems" How ironic you said that. Hugs // Charlie
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March 24, 2018 at 11:32 PM
A very touching story attached to your adorable poem, Charles. Well done and congrats.
Messina Avatar
March 25, 2018 at 8:50 AM
Hi Line, Thanks so much for comment. So glad you like it ! An adorable poem for the adorable little girl I met. All the best to you. Very nice to meet you !! Charlie
Gentry Avatar
March 24, 2018 at 8:56 PM
Congratulations on your win! To take the time to do something this is special and only done by special people. Very touching story and great poem.
Messina Avatar
March 25, 2018 at 8:53 AM
Hi Susan, Thanks so much for your kind words. There is nothing more special than touching others in a warm way and to put a smile on their faces. Very nice to meet you and all the best as well ! Charlie
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March 22, 2018 at 4:02 PM
- Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Charles :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Messina Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 4:43 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, Thank you so much. This is the first time I ever won in a contest so I am thrilled. Keep smiling Sunshine - hugs// Charlie :)
One Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 3:50 PM
So touching and so beautiful Charles.. Congratulation on your first place, we should all be there for one another, so we can all be strong..
Messina Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 4:40 PM
Hi Silent One, OMG I had no idea my poem came in first place. I am absolutely thrilled !! Thank you so much...You are right we should all be there for one another. hugs// Charlie
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