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Happy Father's Day: Your Sweat Is My Increase

your left hand was hard, but your right, gracious putting me in the balance of Love of which its fulcrum is discipline and respect. Your weaknesses were classified just to ensure I see beyond mine Your chastisement was not without pain of which its appreciation is a strong indicator of my gradual maturity. You always guard the gates of my territory like a Centurion and fight against all antigens like a warlock. You taught me how to be complete and provided the staff and Ass as I journey across Life and appreciate. I initially thought of you differently when you gave me the partially made sandal, when you refused to help with the air-tight metal box, when you gave me bone while milk was still my best delicacy when you laughed at me while I'm confused and worst of all, stopping Mum to come to my rescue. I never knew they were task of Life I most needed, finishing off the sandal made me industrious, opening the box, made me determined and never relenting, chewing the annoying bone made me grow up; your scorn and laughter actually made me decisive and rescuing myself made me independent. All these sum up to making me a MAN! Which makes you my Hero and role model. Before I was, there was you; in fact, I am in existence because of you. I've always clinged unto you as my Life's support but you allow me make my mistakes so as to be the best gadget. Your regulation of Mum's affections only makes me be an unspoilt egg. I always increase when you sweat and your headaches are stepping stones to my zeniths. You are such an irreplaceable asset and your love, so refreshing as the evening air. What more can I say and how else can I show gratitude? As much as I know, you need none of these, One thing I must always say is, I LOVE YOU DAD!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/25/2016 9:03:00 PM
FUNOM, THANK YOU for blessing my comment with a reply. THAT WAS NICE OF YOU!!! PD**
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/28/2016 8:27:00 AM
Thank you too Linda
Date: 1/13/2016 12:59:00 AM
Funom, Congratulations on your win. Luv ~LINDA~
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/25/2016 1:19:00 PM
Thank you so much Linda... As always, you've been of a great encouragement to me
Date: 1/10/2016 10:47:00 AM
One of the best I have read for the contest, congratulations.
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/25/2016 1:19:00 PM
Thank you so much Richard, its been a long while
Date: 1/6/2016 12:00:00 PM
Funom, Congratulations on your win, in Judy Konos Dad contest. Love **SKAT**
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/25/2016 1:18:00 PM
Thank you so much SKAT
Date: 1/6/2016 4:59:00 AM
What brave father. I sense the man he molded. I'm sure he would be very proud.
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/25/2016 1:18:00 PM
yes he is... Thank you very much
Date: 1/5/2016 8:34:00 PM
Your dad was there for you. You were fortunate and I am glad you appreciate him. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/25/2016 1:17:00 PM
Thank you so much Joyce
Date: 1/5/2016 3:40:00 PM
Thank you for being in my contest. Your dad wanted you to think for yourself, meet your own trials and you apparently have won because you learned from your dad.
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/25/2016 1:17:00 PM
Thank you so much Judy Konos
Date: 1/12/2014 4:58:00 AM
wow. very nice and very touching one.. :) me i have not been that much with my father but really i love each moment i have with him.. :) keep on writing :)
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/12/2014 5:05:00 AM
Thanks so much Olive eloisa quilermo
Date: 6/16/2013 2:03:00 PM
Oh, great Father's Day poem, Funom. I quite enjoyed it. Your Dad should be proud to know that he produced a Man. Hope you having a Happy Father's Day!
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/16/2013 6:33:00 PM
Yes my dear, thanks a lot Toquyen Harell for this wonderful comment

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