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Happy Fathers Day

He had four children whom he loved and adored. I am glad he had room in his heart for three more. He was hard,forceful and gentle that was just his way. we wasnt the three easiest to raise, but him and mom braved each day. now that i am older i can see the love in his eyes his since of humor, trust and pride He watched us grow and guided our lives. Now he guides the grandchildren 15 in all. and even plays with the 8 great grands wow what a haul. He enriched our lives in so many ways. How can i thank you i could never count the ways. I know one thing this man is no step he the only father in this world that i respect, Ray is my dad I am happy to say Happy fathers day DAD!!! I love you every day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/9/2016 1:08:00 AM
nice to see this one again, kirby. skat
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Date: 1/9/2014 7:07:00 AM
lovely in every way, Kirby, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/8/2014 5:19:00 AM
Wow! Just as I do. I love my father too.
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Date: 1/8/2014 3:19:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Kirby ! - Lovely poem to fathers day - well written - Pleased to read your first poem. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck !! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/7/2014 7:28:00 PM
Kirby, love the early, and everyday fathers day poem... , I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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