William Kelii Kekaula Poet Quintain (Sicilian)

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Happy Birthday Two Us

*Image of Childhood by Pixabay

Happy Birthday Two Us

Autumn equinox nigh rathe September,
Wraps of summer unwrapped gift from a friend,
Occasions annular trek, remember,
A statement by a newfound friend, again,
Cinder Girl's birthday, two glows the ember.

2022 September 07
*4th Place*
Remember September
~~Andrea Dietrich: Judged 2022 September 23

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Andrea Dietrich September 23, 2022 at 8:16 PM Cute how you used Two in place of Too. I really liked that. Congrats in the contest, my friend. William Kelii Kekaula September 24, 2022 at 9:10 AM A celebration of our birthdays, Andrea, being so close--having fun posting a fact my friend, Aloha William