Happy Birthday Two Us

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*Image of Childhood by Pixabay Happy Birthday Two Us Autumn equinox nigh rathe September, Wraps of summer unwrapped gift from a friend, Occasions annular trek, remember, A statement by a newfound friend, again, Cinder Girl's birthday, two glows the ember. 2022 September 07 *4th Place* Remember September ~~Andrea Dietrich: Judged 2022 September 23

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/23/2022 8:16:00 PM

Cute how you used Two in place of Too. I really liked that. Congrats in the contest, my friend.

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/24/2022 9:10:00 AM

A celebration of our birthdays, Andrea, being so close--having fun posting a fact my friend, Aloha William