Mystic Rose Rose Poet Acrostic

Happy Birthday My Love

Dear Aldo, when I met you it was on your birthday. One single  
Elective rose sat on your jacket, you took it off and gave it to me  
Aldo, even your name rolls off my tongue.  Even after 43 years I    
Reach for your breast and pluck an imaginary rose from you 

Love never ends in our house of marriage.  Now that we are    
Old,... I pluck a rose from your eyes each time you look at me 
Vienna is my real name, and Mystic Rose is my nom de plume  
Each time I write about us, another rose blooms in my heart. 

Happy Birthday My Love ! 


September 1, 2021
Sponsor	Funom Makama
Contest Name	A Poem to your spouse on his-her birthday

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Marikate Kingston September 22, 2021 at 10:09 PM That's so pretty! I have loved you nom de plume since I began at PS. Roses are lovely. They were my wedding bouquet. You both look so in love and so happy. This would make a a beautiful picture framed.

Paula Goldsmith September 20, 2021 at 12:47 PM Congratulations on your win. A lovely birthday, Acrostic write and picture. Have a blessed day......................

Funom Makama September 20, 2021 at 7:19 AM This is beautiful. Thank you so much for submitting this wonderful piece to my contest. A big big big congratulations to you. I feel truly honoured. Mystic Rose Rose September 20, 2021 at 9:28 AM Thank you Funom for honoring me with the lovely win. It was a pleasure to write for you.

Delice Arleen Skelly September 4, 2021 at 9:08 PM Absolutely lovely Vie...Delice

Eve Roper September 2, 2021 at 5:17 PM Such a heartfelt verse, a valentines card or as you wrote a Happy Birthday. Great for a win. Hugs

Virginia Gelok September 1, 2021 at 6:45 PM Such a sincere show of emotional love makes the reader know that this wish is real. I loved it.

Judy Ball September 1, 2021 at 2:31 PM PS Love the pic here . You can see the love in both of your eyes. JB

Judy Ball September 1, 2021 at 2:29 PM This is so touching and beautifully written. I hope you created a fitting card and gave it to him to keep. I know he loves this. Great job. (43 yrs. hmmmm. you are still newly weds. It's 55 for me and my hubby.) God Bless, JB ps Happy Birthday Aldo

Tom Cunningham September 1, 2021 at 12:44 PM What a lovely birthday tribute to your husband Vie, hope he had a lovely day. Best of luck in the contest. Tom

Regina Mcintosh September 1, 2021 at 11:10 AM Beautiful!!! I love it. God bless you always, Love, Gina

Victor Buhagiar September 1, 2021 at 9:51 AM A lovely birthday card for your Aldo. Simply beautiful. Hugs.

L Milton Hankins September 1, 2021 at 9:45 AM Sweet tribute to your husband on his birthday, Vie. I see it placing well in the contest. Loved the pic, too. Happy Birthday, Aldo!

Charles Messina September 1, 2021 at 9:36 AM Lovely poem, Vienna. Happy Birthday to Aldo! Now don't forget to spread some of those rose pedals on the bed tonight (lol) Have a blessed day dear friend... Hugs Charlie

Emilia James September 1, 2021 at 7:55 AM A gorgeous poem Mystic Rose. A bouquet of love that blooms forever strong. Happy Birthday Aldo. Emilia : )