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Happy Birthday My Love

Dear Aldo, when I met you it was on your birthday. One single Elective rose sat on your jacket, you took it off and gave it to me Aldo, even your name rolls off my tongue. Even after 43 years I Reach for your breast and pluck an imaginary rose from you Love never ends in our house of marriage. Now that we are Old,... I pluck a rose from your eyes each time you look at me Vienna is my real name, and Mystic Rose is my nom de plume Each time I write about us, another rose blooms in my heart. Happy Birthday My Love !
September 1, 2021 Sponsor Funom Makama Contest Name A Poem to your spouse on his-her birthday

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Date: 9/22/2021 10:09:00 PM
That's so pretty! I have loved you nom de plume since I began at PS. Roses are lovely. They were my wedding bouquet. You both look so in love and so happy. This would make a a beautiful picture framed.
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Date: 9/20/2021 12:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely birthday, Acrostic write and picture. Have a blessed day......................
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Date: 9/20/2021 7:19:00 AM
This is beautiful. Thank you so much for submitting this wonderful piece to my contest. A big big big congratulations to you. I feel truly honoured.
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Date: 9/20/2021 9:28:00 AM
Thank you Funom for honoring me with the lovely win. It was a pleasure to write for you.
Date: 9/4/2021 9:08:00 PM
Absolutely lovely Vie...Delice
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Date: 9/2/2021 5:17:00 PM
Such a heartfelt verse, a valentines card or as you wrote a Happy Birthday. Great for a win. Hugs
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Date: 9/1/2021 6:45:00 PM
Such a sincere show of emotional love makes the reader know that this wish is real. I loved it.
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Date: 9/1/2021 2:31:00 PM
PS Love the pic here . You can see the love in both of your eyes. JB
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Date: 9/1/2021 2:29:00 PM
This is so touching and beautifully written. I hope you created a fitting card and gave it to him to keep. I know he loves this. Great job. (43 yrs. hmmmm. you are still newly weds. It's 55 for me and my hubby.) God Bless, JB ps Happy Birthday Aldo
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Date: 9/1/2021 12:44:00 PM
What a lovely birthday tribute to your husband Vie, hope he had a lovely day. Best of luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 9/1/2021 11:10:00 AM
Beautiful!!! I love it. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Date: 9/1/2021 9:51:00 AM
A lovely birthday card for your Aldo. Simply beautiful. Hugs.
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Date: 9/1/2021 9:45:00 AM
Sweet tribute to your husband on his birthday, Vie. I see it placing well in the contest. Loved the pic, too. Happy Birthday, Aldo!
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Date: 9/1/2021 9:36:00 AM
Lovely poem, Vienna. Happy Birthday to Aldo! Now don't forget to spread some of those rose pedals on the bed tonight (lol) Have a blessed day dear friend... Hugs Charlie
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Date: 9/1/2021 7:55:00 AM
A gorgeous poem Mystic Rose. A bouquet of love that blooms forever strong. Happy Birthday Aldo. Emilia : )
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