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Happy Birthday, Jennifer


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Jennifer, I hope your birthday (28 August) was sweet and special, dear friend. You have given so much to Poetry Soup and the poets therein. Written lovingly in emulation of your inimitable style. 


Wouldn't it be heaven:
to be
set free
from every
boundary
from time and gravity
from crime and war
and hatred we abhor
see the loved ones we knew before

To float in streams
and fly in dreams
to be free from fear
see colors so clear
and have new ones appear

Soaring like birds
on wings of words
nature's draught imbibed
lovingly described
a trek over stream and dale
tell a versified tale

Sharing our feasts
with birds and beasts
no conflict or strife
a non-violent life
enveloped in the peace we dream of
these three remain: faith, hope, love

Hearing trumpets resound
children's laughter abound
to be absolved of all sin
free of dark thoughts within
to reunite with those we have missed
as we dance in the heavenly mist
the undying goal
of the undying soul
to walk with God
on heaven's sod
to know traquility
for eternity
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Dietrich Avatar
September 7, 2022 at 5:51 PM
WoW, what an awesome Birthday tribute. So filled with inspiration. Wonderful work, John. Don't know how I missed this.
Watt Avatar
September 7, 2022 at 6:39 PM
You've been very busy, dear friend!
Brul Avatar
September 6, 2022 at 12:49 AM
A wonderful gift for a wonderful poet like Jennifer. What could be more precious gift than this heart-warming tribute? Happy belated birthday Jennifer.
Watt Avatar
September 6, 2022 at 1:08 AM
J, thank you for you generous words for a generous lady and a friend to many. Blessings ~ John
Tor Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 7:26 AM
John wonderful tribute and birthday Poem to a lovely lady. I am sure she will be excited to see this beautiful birthday gift from you. Very thoughtful of you...
Watt Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 4:31 PM
Thank you for your multiple visits today, and for acknowledging here what a lovely lady Jennifer is. I hope she is able to see the blessings here from several of her PS friends ~ John
Wolf Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 8:09 PM
Wow! What a tribute! Very special, John. Very specially penned... And I guess I'll have to wish Jennifer a happy 28th birthday now! Thanks, gw
Watt Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 8:32 PM
GW, I sure appreciate you stopping by to offer your birthday wishes to a very sweet lady of Soup. Enjoy your Labor Day ~ JW
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 31, 2022 at 1:40 AM
Here is wishing a very lovely lady a happy belated birthday. Your poem offers us a bit of heaven John. It is a very lovely tribute for Jennifer’s special day. Blessings xxoo
Watt Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 8:30 PM
Thank you very much Connie for coming by to wish Jennifer a special day. Always grateful for your kindness ~ John
Proxenos Avatar
August 30, 2022 at 2:01 PM
Hi John, a wonderful, thoughtful, surprise my dear friend, delightful. We had no reception in the, bush at the Kruger Park it was intermittent mostly off than on,frustration was intense and here you are saying in your poem, 'enveloped in the peace we dream of, these three remain, faith,hope and love' and somewhere you say no strife, what a Utopia it would be, but with God's grace we all shall one day, see. Thank you so much John, it was very special, my kind friend. Hugs and blessings, Jenn.
Watt Avatar
August 30, 2022 at 2:04 PM
Welcome home, and a belated happy birthday, dear one! You are a topnotch poet, friend, and encouraged! Blessings and birthday hugs ~ John
M  Avatar
August 30, 2022 at 7:57 AM
A Lovely birthday wish for Jennifer , John. She is a very sweet lady! Happy Birthday Jennifer! Debx
Watt Avatar
August 30, 2022 at 2:11 PM
Deb, yes very sweet indeed! Thank you for your kind visit ~ John
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 29, 2022 at 4:04 PM
Hello John Watt, Jennifer would be felling good to read this lovely tribute for her birthday. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Watt Avatar
August 30, 2022 at 2:02 PM
Thank you Darlene. Jennifer is a lovely poet and a sweet lady. Enjoy your day, my friend.
Cunningham Avatar
August 29, 2022 at 12:44 PM
Lovely birthday tribute John, I hope she has a lovely day. Tom
Watt Avatar
August 30, 2022 at 2:00 PM
Thank you for your kind message, Tom. She is a wonderful presence here at Soup and deserves the best.
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