Happy Birthday, Carolyn

Smiles in the sky come flying your way.
They will arrive just in time singing,
 “Happy Birthday” 
Wings glide on the breeze, gifted among clouds,
Suspended above trees with promptness avowed.
The horizon is bright silhouetting their flight.
Delivering your joy and freeing any plight,
This birthday gift sends smiles your way.
On July 14th straight from heaven’s hallway,
One special wish created just for you.
Granting dreams and happiness without adieu. 
God sends His blessings to you...Happy Birthday!

© July 9, 2010
Dane Smith-Johnsen

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 7/12/2010 12:50:00 PM
Beautifully written Dane, and from the heart. Many congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest >> James
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Date: 7/11/2010 9:31:00 PM
Congrats on the HM win, Dane
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Date: 7/11/2010 5:23:00 PM
Hi, Dane, this was a NEAT O entry. Glad to see you back here so busy. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/11/2010 3:58:00 PM
Congratulations, Dane, Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/11/2010 12:07:00 PM
Thank you for the birthday wishes, Dane Ann. Congratulations on your placement in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/9/2010 9:59:00 PM
well done!!
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Date: 7/9/2010 8:57:00 PM
... what better & sweeter wishes could one offer? ... a good tune! Cheers, Caro-lyn ... Dane-Ann. Canny
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Date: 7/9/2010 6:53:00 PM
What a wonderful gift to a very special lady Dane... I miss you and hope your welll.., love always and counting our Blessings One By One The Keeper
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Date: 7/9/2010 5:19:00 PM
Wonderful gift for a special birthday.. bravo Dane Ann for such a fitting tribute.. with luv..
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Date: 7/9/2010 5:08:00 PM
Thanks so much, Dane Ann!! Having you as a friend makes every day special. Love, Carolyn
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