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Happy As a Songbird

Happy as a Songbird days of hard rain fell yellow tinged silence followed birds rejoiced in song ....couple weeks ago, it rained hard for days here in Minnesota, movement ceased for a few days...then life renewed!

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Sharon Winter

Date: 6/14/2010 4:14:00 PM

beautiful! hope you're happy as a songbird! many more happy birthdays! love, shar

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/29/2010 2:24:00 PM

Enjoyed the Haiku...Sometimes when it rains it seems everything like man hibernates then when it is over they come back out to live again...Thanks for the comments on my work..I appreciate you taking the time to do that...Sorry that I am so long in returning the comments for I have been out of town..Sara

Brian Strand

Date: 5/28/2010 12:18:00 AM

Jim re your query I would say the technical form is a rhymed 'trochiac tetrameter',four stresses in eight syllable lines.A talented lady indeed.Best wishes with your writing endeavours.Rgds Brian

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/20/2010 4:38:00 PM

Love it, James. I wish this contest had lasted longer and had more entries. it was so nice.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/20/2010 7:29:00 AM

Congrats Jimbo on your winning poem in Rick's contest with this uplifting visual Haiku.. I am on vacation till June 1st trying to catch up with comments and congrats.. enjoy a great win..with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/19/2010 7:16:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. This is lovely and sensitive to true beauty. Love, Joyce

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/19/2010 5:57:00 PM

It has been raining here too....and the songbirds love it!! Congratulations, James on your winning poem! ~ Carrie

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/19/2010 5:24:00 PM

So glad to see you WIN..do the I'm a winner ..beter known as the ltle tepot dance! Light & Love

Joe Flach

Date: 5/18/2010 9:10:00 PM

Nicely written James. You should be happy as a song bird when this Haiku wins in the contest. Joe

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 5/18/2010 8:25:00 PM

Very nice Haiku, Jim. You should enter it in the "rain" contest. Best wishes, Caroline.

Skat A

Date: 5/18/2010 8:23:00 PM

BEAUTIFUL HAIKU, MUCH ENJOYED