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Happy and Sad

Rain
Dark clouds
Ink black sky
Stormy weather
A rainstorm always makes me feel happy

Hate the glare reflected on wet pavements
When the rain stops
Hurts my eyes
Makes me
Frown


Jack Horne for Michael’s Smiles and Frowns

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Caryl Ramsdale

July 29, 2011 at 12:01 PM

Oh yes! You are very talented. Congratulations! Caryl

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 25, 2011 at 10:04 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Michael's "Smiles and Frowns" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Jun-Jun Villanueva

July 23, 2011 at 8:06 PM

so glad to SHARE the placement with a great poem and a great master. . .smile. . .CONGRATULATIONS! ! ! *_*junjun

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 23, 2011 at 3:50 PM

Congrats jack on another exciting with for fantastic poetry so entertaining luv..

Andrea Dietrich

July 23, 2011 at 11:47 AM

Jack, a big congratulations to you. It was a great poem on a unique topic!

Black Eyed Susan

July 23, 2011 at 11:14 AM

congratulations on your win Jack!

Dr.Ram Mehta

July 23, 2011 at 10:54 AM

My congratulations on this win in the contest of Michael, jack

Carolyn Devonshire

July 21, 2011 at 3:06 PM

After more than three weeks of storms, our rain finally stopped, Jack. I love rain, too, but if you visited me now, you'd be basking in sun -- and HEAT! Cool entry for Michel's contest, dear friend. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

July 20, 2011 at 9:57 PM

I really like how you did this one, but I"d probably be reversing it and smiling after the rain stopped. haha. Sometimes rain IS very refreshing, isn't it? And when one needs a good cooling off, it's pure delight. I am sure Michael will love this one.

Kash Poet

July 20, 2011 at 11:00 AM

An interesting way to do the contest jack.Nice write here.Best wishes.

Emma Mantle

July 20, 2011 at 9:51 AM

A great entry for Michael's contest, I'm sure this will do well. Thanks for stopping by my work, best wishes Em :)

Judy Ball

July 20, 2011 at 9:33 AM

I agree my friend. I like being inside all warm and dry on a stormy night whether it be rain or snow but hate the glare on the road because I can't see where I'm going and I have to go on faith. Good write my friend. God Bless, JB

Wilma Neels

July 20, 2011 at 7:13 AM

Hey there Jack, interesting route you went with your entry.. Wishing you all the best with it.. As for the "lfde" it actually stands for "liefde" which is the Afrikaans word for Love ;) sorry just me being silly and throwing in a little bit of my Home language :) See it is not something you would say ahh of course too ;) hope I made you smile with my madness - liefde Wilma..