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Rain Dark clouds Ink black sky Stormy weather A rainstorm always makes me feel happy Hate the glare reflected on wet pavements When the rain stops Hurts my eyes Makes me Frown Jack Horne for Michael’s Smiles and Frowns

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Date: 7/29/2011 12:01:00 PM
Oh yes! You are very talented. Congratulations! Caryl
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Date: 7/25/2011 10:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Michael's "Smiles and Frowns" contest Jack. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/23/2011 8:06:00 PM
so glad to SHARE the placement with a great poem and a great master. . .smile. . .CONGRATULATIONS! ! ! *_*junjun
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Date: 7/23/2011 3:50:00 PM
Congrats jack on another exciting with for fantastic poetry so entertaining luv..
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Date: 7/23/2011 11:47:00 AM
Jack, a big congratulations to you. It was a great poem on a unique topic!
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Date: 7/23/2011 11:14:00 AM
congratulations on your win Jack!
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Date: 7/23/2011 10:54:00 AM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of Michael, jack
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Date: 7/21/2011 3:06:00 PM
After more than three weeks of storms, our rain finally stopped, Jack. I love rain, too, but if you visited me now, you'd be basking in sun -- and HEAT! Cool entry for Michel's contest, dear friend. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/20/2011 9:57:00 PM
I really like how you did this one, but I"d probably be reversing it and smiling after the rain stopped. haha. Sometimes rain IS very refreshing, isn't it? And when one needs a good cooling off, it's pure delight. I am sure Michael will love this one.
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Date: 7/20/2011 11:00:00 AM
An interesting way to do the contest jack.Nice write here.Best wishes.
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Date: 7/20/2011 9:51:00 AM
A great entry for Michael's contest, I'm sure this will do well. Thanks for stopping by my work, best wishes Em :)
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Date: 7/20/2011 9:33:00 AM
I agree my friend. I like being inside all warm and dry on a stormy night whether it be rain or snow but hate the glare on the road because I can't see where I'm going and I have to go on faith. Good write my friend. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/20/2011 7:13:00 AM
Hey there Jack, interesting route you went with your entry.. Wishing you all the best with it.. As for the "lfde" it actually stands for "liefde" which is the Afrikaans word for Love ;) sorry just me being silly and throwing in a little bit of my Home language :) See it is not something you would say ahh of course too ;) hope I made you smile with my madness - liefde Wilma..
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Date: 7/19/2011 6:54:00 PM
I really like what you are saying here . It's a great premise, but I have to tell you something in soupmail.
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Date: 7/19/2011 2:58:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your poem today and we have so many theories out there that are crazy. God Bless Phyl
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