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*Image of Candles at God's Acres by Pixabay. Happy 93rd Birthday Mom June twenty-four mom's ninety-third birthday, No candles or cakes except the bouquet, Flowers for her and no banquet setting, Just keepin' it plain -- no scene and fretting, Illumes shed true we've aged, noted we've grown, Blooms laid neath her imaged rosette gravestone. Inspired: 2022 June 16 *HM* Bite Size Poem no.47 ~~Line Gauthier: Judged 2022 June 23

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/10/2022 2:54:00 PM

Lovely tribute, Hilo ~

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/10/2022 5:07:00 PM

Thank you, Line, I appreciate it my friend, Aloha William

Valsa George

Date: 6/24/2022 8:13:00 PM

An unostentatious birthday celebration, but a genuine one celebrated at heart ! She must be smiling from Heaven at the bouquet of flowers placed on her tombstone as a bouquet of love and gratitude! Congratuations on your great win dear Williams !

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/24/2022 9:36:00 PM

As I'm the last of my family, Valsa, I'm their caretaker now, done for the sake of love, whereto, inspired my return home. Grace be with you my friend, Aloha~William

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/24/2022 3:22:00 AM

This is poignant and the longing and missing her is felt deeply. Beautiful William. Congratulations on your win. Blessings xxoo

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/24/2022 9:27:00 PM

A graceful calm at Homelani Cemetary, Connie, as I placed two jars of Hawaiian flowers and greenery on each side of their headstone. This occasion was the inspiration for my return home. Blessings truly my friend, Aloha~William

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/23/2022 8:46:00 PM

A touching poem. Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/23/2022 9:36:00 PM

Heartfelt thanks, Christuraj, two jars of flowers on each side of her headstone my friend, Aloha~William

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/23/2022 7:32:00 AM

Congratulations on this win. A wonderful tribute to great woman, your Mom. Enjoy your win and day with blessings...........

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/23/2022 8:40:00 AM

I'm grateful for your praise, Paula, and pleasing sentiments, blessings my friend, Aloha~William

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 6/19/2022 11:51:00 PM

A beautiful tribute poem in memory of your mom on her special day William. Best wishes with greetings from the UK… Poet pal Belle

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/20/2022 12:45:00 AM

A touching message, Belle, and thanks for the boost, CHEERS 'mate' (uncertain if it's a gender-neutral word like the Aussies) c'est la vie mon amie, Aloha~William