Happy-Snappy Birthday Jane

Jane, Jane
You're so mundane;
Your cackle, your laugh  reminds me much such
As of a champagne
Your voice makes me queasy
And yet you are feisty
Though this message
May seem arcane
Happy, snappy birthday Jane

6/8/19
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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June 9, 2019 at 3:43 AM
I feel confident that you wrote this specifically for Jane, a friend. Nice one.
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