Happiness Supremacy

(a short poem)


nothing can ever be compared
for a woman who's working all day.
late at night she'still awake.
striving hard to provide their needs.
one Valentine morning has came.
four little darlings surprised her.
lovely cards crafted by their hands,
and a heart stuff they bought from their coin bank.
truely that life's sometimes unfair.
too many struggles,roughroads and pain,
have all gone when these four little ladies came.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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February 14, 2014 at 11:19 PM
By the way, who are the 4 ladies? Deep, and short, however, I enjoyed... Linda
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February 16, 2014 at 2:57 AM
those four little ladies are the fruit of my womb, PD...my source of happiness and strength..ty!!! >__<
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February 14, 2014 at 11:16 PM
Thank you Aiyah, for all the nice fun comments. I can't express how much your visits and words meant to me. ----When I fully return to the soup, I will drop by to leave you some soup mail. Sending Valentine Hugs.... xox~ Linda
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