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Happiness Is Heart Shaped

heart pain horrendous 
heart attack happening hurts...
heartburn... happy heart


18th March 2019
Contest:Writing Challenge
Sponsor: Dear Heart
5th place

healthheartpainsenryu

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Eve Roper

March 20, 2019 at 6:51 PM

Ann,I wouldn't want to have any of those :) congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*

Ann Gilmour

March 20, 2019 at 10:01 PM

Thank you so much Eve for your comments and congrats, kindest thoughts Ann xx

Constance La France

March 20, 2019 at 5:03 PM

Ann, congratulations on your win in my contest with this Senryu ~

Ann Gilmour

March 20, 2019 at 6:06 PM

Thank you so much Dear Heart for my placement in your great contest. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 20, 2019 at 2:35 PM

- Congratulations on your great win, Ann :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ann Gilmour

March 20, 2019 at 10:03 PM

Many thanks Anne-Lise for your congrats and hugs, kindest thoughts Ann xx

Andrea Dietrich

March 19, 2019 at 6:32 PM

yes, I think heartburn would be the least terrible of the three!!

Ann Gilmour

March 20, 2019 at 10:04 PM

Thanks Andrea for your comments kindest thoughts Ann xx

Caren Krutsinger

March 18, 2019 at 6:57 PM

This should do well in the contest; we all need to think of the heart, especially being poets, and when you consider our average ages - oh,yes, Ann. Nicely done!

Ann Gilmour

March 18, 2019 at 7:04 PM

Yes Caren when the heart stops that is it. I was inspired to write this today as my best friend's hubby had quite a scare this afternoon - he truly thought he was having a heart attack, thank God he didn't - though very scary! Kindest thoughts Ann xx