Happiness is an arrival

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                   *  **************************   because  *
            / * /* /**********************      you are    *              
         **    ****                                    arriving now * *         
    The world became a magic place again. ***********                                                                    
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Bowring Avatar
February 2, 2024 at 2:12 PM
Dear kindred spirit - my lovely Wen- I’m with Anaya - you are the best with these shape forms. No doubt about it. I’m always in awe of your creativity. Jay’s comment made me chuckle too :) The music goes so well with the poem. Love your magical words here. They float airborne, sky high, like the magnificent plane you’ve created. The more I look at it, the more I’m admiring it. It’s very impressive as you are my sweet friend. Hugs to you for a lovely day xx
Volumes Avatar
February 2, 2024 at 11:00 PM
Dear Chris, once again your magic words are so uplifting. Tomorrow is my day to read nothing but good poetry and comment on it, so I can reciprocate some of your beautiful comments ( if I find any I like ) Hahahahahah. Thanks so much. Wen
Anaya Avatar
January 30, 2024 at 7:51 PM
I always find your shape poems the best art I've seen. Love the song too. The filled in words are magic, SV. It cheered me up. Faving this. :)
Anaya Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 11:13 AM
I'll check it out, not sure what you mean yet...hehe I'll be back! Oh I see, yes you are, you'll figure it out. I just spent too much time trying to figure out how to add Milo to my glam shot. Hahah
Volumes Avatar
January 30, 2024 at 9:51 PM
Sweetest Anaya, someone as lovely as you should always be cheered. I was "uncheered" yesterday. I spent a couple of hours creating a poem about dolphins in the shape of a dolphin. Its pretty good, but when I went to paste the words onto a submission page of Soup so I could Post it, ITS TOO BIG ! To fit it I would have to change the whole thing. ( your friend isn't clever - pretty stupid wasting hours lol.) Thanks for your lovely comment...Best wishes from 1 of ur besties.. Wen
Narain Avatar
January 30, 2024 at 10:03 AM
Beautiful artistry. Now you can design flawless Boeing airplanes.
Anaya Avatar
January 30, 2024 at 7:51 PM
Lol
Volumes Avatar
January 30, 2024 at 3:14 PM
Hahahahaha Oh you are wonderful Jay ! This lovely comment really did make me chuckle. Thanks for brightening my day. Best wishes from Wen.
Rose  Avatar
January 30, 2024 at 4:48 AM
Magically spoken dear poet, congrats on your win !
Volumes Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 4:23 AM
Thank you so very much M.R. Your lovely comment is sincerely appreciated. Very best wishes from Wen
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