Happiness and Disgust

When happy kids play in snow
and fall face-down that gives me
the broadest smile.


I frown at people
who litter, wondering
if they do it at home.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Onclaud Avatar
August 29, 2012 at 12:28 AM
i hope the broadest smiles are the one that litter.. great stuff, andrew and best wishes..:) huggs!
Pettit Avatar
August 27, 2012 at 11:41 PM
In some places, there is a five hundred dollar fine for littering. Good pair of senryu.
Dietrich Avatar
August 27, 2012 at 9:10 PM
this is really great, Andrew. I like the unique way you did your senryu for the contest. nice seeing you tonight.
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