Larry Bradfield Poet Rhyme

Happiness

To describe it and be fair, it's blue eyes and golden hair.
A wink and a saucy smile that says, "Wait, just wait awhile."
A tanned shoulder that's laid bare and says,"Yes, you know I care."
The love you sought comes in style - happiness is a wedding aisle.

8/9/2017

For contest Rhyme Battle,Happiness: Round 8, for Juli-Michelle

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Gregory Richard Barden October 7, 2017 at 1:24 AM Larry - Congratulations on your well-deserved win with this wonderful write - blessings and keep up the great work, my friend! :-) Larry Bradfield October 12, 2017 at 12:02 AM Thank you, Gregory!

Shirley Rebstock October 5, 2017 at 7:44 AM This poem is almost like a story stirring the imagination. Larry Bradfield October 12, 2017 at 12:02 AM Thank you, Shirley

Heidi Sands October 4, 2017 at 4:05 PM Congratulations Larry :) Larry Bradfield October 4, 2017 at 9:27 PM Thank you, Heidi!. I value your comment!

Constance La France October 4, 2017 at 2:06 PM Larry, congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful write ! Larry Bradfield October 4, 2017 at 9:26 PM Thank you, Broken Wings....I am flattered!

Juli- Michelle October 4, 2017 at 1:25 PM Larry, this poem made me smile so many times.. it's absolutely lovely. I'm sorry for the long wait in this contest, but congratulations on your second place win! You deserve it, a wonderful poem! Love, Juli-Michelle Larry Bradfield October 4, 2017 at 9:24 PM Thank you , Juli-Michelle! That's quite a challenge you posed and I'm pleased to have placed in your contest!!