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Happiness

To describe it and be fair, it's blue eyes and golden hair. A wink and a saucy smile that says, "Wait, just wait awhile." A tanned shoulder that's laid bare and says,"Yes, you know I care." The love you sought comes in style - happiness is a wedding aisle. 8/9/2017 For contest Rhyme Battle,Happiness: Round 8, for Juli-Michelle

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 10/7/2017 1:24:00 AM

Larry - Congratulations on your well-deserved win with this wonderful write - blessings and keep up the great work, my friend! :-)

Larry Bradfield
Date: 10/12/2017 12:02:00 AM

Thank you, Gregory!

Shirley Rebstock

Date: 10/5/2017 7:44:00 AM

This poem is almost like a story stirring the imagination.

Larry Bradfield
Date: 10/12/2017 12:02:00 AM

Thank you, Shirley

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/4/2017 4:05:00 PM

Congratulations Larry :)

Larry Bradfield
Date: 10/4/2017 9:27:00 PM

Thank you, Heidi!. I value your comment!

Constance La France

Date: 10/4/2017 2:06:00 PM

Larry, congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful write !

Larry Bradfield
Date: 10/4/2017 9:26:00 PM

Thank you, Broken Wings....I am flattered!

Juli- Michelle

Date: 10/4/2017 1:25:00 PM

Larry, this poem made me smile so many times.. it's absolutely lovely. I'm sorry for the long wait in this contest, but congratulations on your second place win! You deserve it, a wonderful poem! Love, Juli-Michelle

Larry Bradfield
Date: 10/4/2017 9:24:00 PM

Thank you , Juli-Michelle! That's quite a challenge you posed and I'm pleased to have placed in your contest!!