Happiness

Happiness is full of grace
This was said, but now I see
Joy brightens each new day
You're the only one for me

This was said. but now I see
Harmony sings effortlessly
You're the only one for me
You were sent by God to thee

Harmony sings effortlessly
Joy brightens each new day
You were sent by God to thee
Happiness is full of grace

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Manmath Dalei

May 18, 2016 at 12:56 AM

Dot, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead...........//:) hugs

Jolene Cheyney

May 18, 2016 at 9:48 AM

Thanks, but I'm not sure I'm staying. Love would appear to be lost. Too painful to stay if that's the case.

Tim Smith

May 16, 2016 at 11:13 AM

Terrific first offering Dot. Thanks for the visit to my poem. Tim

Skat A

May 16, 2016 at 1:28 AM

I love happiness, DOT, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"

Poet Destroyer A

May 15, 2016 at 10:57 PM

Dot Tree, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Gail Underwood

May 15, 2016 at 4:21 PM

Such a beautiful poem Dot

Dot Tree

May 15, 2016 at 4:43 PM

Thank you for your positive feedback. It is very kind of you to say this. I really appreciate the help many here are giving to help me expand my knowledge of poetic form and vocabulary.

Happiness

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