Happiness

"Countdown to Happiness"
by:  Eric L. Boddie

Happiness, as people Praying is news Eric surely shares
 Aspiring poets portray intense new emotions someone snared
  People pretend if nothing ever Saves Souls
   Perhaps it needs every silver shoal
    Indeed, nothing ever stands storms
     Not every squadron swarms
      Evil suggests sinfulness?
       Savior's Success!
        Solidifiedness....

12-15-15

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Funom Makama

Date: 12/22/2015 8:07:00 AM

your discrete lines filled with sweet smelling ingredients so palatable to the mind are just beyond gratitude and appreciation. This page is a wonder and your poetry speaks volume of creativity beyond physical perspective. keep it up friend and this is definitely a 7.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 12/18/2015 2:57:00 PM

" Aspiring poets portray intense emotions someone snared" Love that line best of all...excellent choice of words for this particular limerick Eric. I also appreciated the great use of alliteration. Always, Laura

Eric Boddie
Date: 12/19/2015 1:48:00 PM

thank you laura....because of you I found a mistake I made but I fixed it now....so thank you once again....;)

Eve Roper

Date: 12/16/2015 12:41:00 AM

Amen!love your rhyme

Eric Boddie
Date: 12/16/2015 9:41:00 PM

thank you eve....the truth shall set us free....;)