Notes About The Poem

Written for the list contest sponsored by Andrea D.

 

Happiness

Happiness is scattering herbs of kindness,
   watering weathered willows in the wilderness.

Happiness is following lavender streaks of twilight~
  gliding across cerulean skies, so bright.

Happiness, a synonymous noun for my precious son,
  his lyrical laughter, mirrors the rose moon and sun.

Happiness is wildflower wishes that free flow~
 woven with sunflower syllables, amidst inked woe.

Happiness is the dahlia sanctuary of my beloved’s heartbeat,
  as home is a frangipani feeling in his poetic retreat.

Happiness is reminiscing magic within violet vapors, 
  recoloring mauve meadows on watercolor wallpapers.

Happiness is walking away from deceptive witches, 
  alone, wearing cashmere cardigans with no lethal stitches.

Happiness is indulging in the chocolate flavor, so sweet, 
   when my cousin bakes hearty muffins, together we eat.

Happiness soars from magnetic melodies of an electric guitar,
  harmonizing diamond serenades of my twin-star.

Happiness is an endless emotion of peaceful purification,
 when soul feels warmth through internal perfection. 
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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George Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 5:49 AM
Congratulations on your win dear Ink.
Poet Avatar
April 1, 2024 at 10:07 AM
How nicely you explain bliss, Ink. Happiness is a lovely sensation, and this poem captures it nicely. This is a favorite. Congratulations on your win!
Goldsmith Avatar
April 1, 2024 at 9:28 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Happiness" write with a  Great Ending... So True... Have a blessed day................
Fowler Avatar
April 1, 2024 at 8:03 AM
Congratulations Inky! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
April 1, 2024 at 7:42 AM
Happiness, a synonymous noun for my precious son, his lyrical laughter, mirrors the rose moon and sun...how lovely! … dahlia sanctuary of my beloved’s heartbeat…Congratulations, dear Rose!
Dietrich Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 8:05 PM
Spectacular, Ink. Thanks for trying my challenge and big congrats.
Empress Avatar
April 1, 2024 at 12:32 AM
Thank you so very much sweet andrea always grateful for your support
Hind Avatar
March 20, 2024 at 4:33 PM
So sweet, like 'chocalate' :) There are so many lines, I just don't know where to start, but I LOVED this, keep shining, we all need your light <3 :)
George Avatar
March 20, 2024 at 1:46 PM
Happiness seems like a fun thing. I really liked the different views of happiness. Happiness is a lot of things but sadness is. You write as your name dear Ink.
Beaufort Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 10:11 AM
IE, this is a lot of fun to read since I never know what to expect. Each little surprise is a treat...and you are making me smile with each creative line. It's also wonderful to celebrate in poetry the things that do make us feel good. That you chose this word to repeat is a gift to all of us who have the happy experience to get to this page. Some of the lines also make me stop and think. It's a little spot to stop and enjoy...like walking down 5th avenue and checking out each shop/museum.
Hamilton Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 9:38 PM
how lovely Ink great flow gl in contest hugs Shadow
Buehler Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 9:10 AM
Feelings of happiness are inspired by this poem, and its beautiful images, Ink. Best of luck in the contest. :)
Empress Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 10:56 AM
Thank you so very much
One Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 8:16 AM
So much happiness here and so well done from your pen.. It is always important to count our blessings.. there will not always be good days, some days will be really hard, but we make our own happiness in life.. I feel to be happy, we need to do things that feed our souls.. Instead of staying in the water, where we just drown.. This looks like a top winner to me..
Empress Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 10:55 AM
True well said. Not sure if i did it as andrea would like but thank you so much for your feedback and well wishes
Xiang Avatar
March 15, 2024 at 11:25 PM
Your happiness is infectious. Your words purify the inkiness of my soul through your internal perfection. I rate it up with Jane Kenyon's rendition of Happiness.
Empress Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 12:14 AM
What a beautiful thing to say, and how kind of you to compare me to a talented poet like jane kenyon. Thanks to you now i know who that is. Im truly grateful for your support
Greenhough Avatar
March 15, 2024 at 8:03 PM
This was truly magnificent. I enjoyed the list of happiness in your life. It seemed to encompass all the ingredients that are ever needed.
Empress Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 12:15 AM
Awn thank you so very much dear hilda always for being so kind and generous. Im grateful for your support
Rodgers Avatar
March 15, 2024 at 5:03 PM
Dearest Empress, what radiant artistic poem with vibrant imagery and heartfelt sentiment. I feel each stanza unfolding like a cherished memory, celebrating the beauty and joy found in life’s simple moments. I love how your poetic words dance with grace and elegance, evoking a sense of serenity and gratitude. I am happy for you because this is an exquisite ode to happiness and the treasures it brings to our lives including my life. Blessings my dear Empress, I am smiling. - Daniel
Empress Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 12:22 AM
Thank you so very much that is so kind of you and so very generous. Im grateful always for your heartfelt comments that are not just comments done for the sake of it but are sincere. Thank you so very much
Parker Avatar
March 15, 2024 at 2:50 PM
Your list is filled with color and serenity of purpose to find peace and laughter...
Empress Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 12:29 AM
Awn thank you so much dear frederick truly grateful always
Rose  Avatar
March 15, 2024 at 6:17 AM
I got caught up in your happiness and in your wonderful interpretation of it, it doesn't have to be illusive does it, if we know how to search it out in the simple things in life that makes it worth living. Thanks for sharing your thoughts today, blessings of the heart :)
Empress Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 12:30 AM
Awwn thank you fragrant rose. I appreciate your presence, so poetically uplifting
Pandit Avatar
March 15, 2024 at 5:58 AM
I like your definitions of happiness, my friend. Splendidly done with metaphors, Ink. A joy to read.
Empress Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 9:45 AM
Thank you always for your kind and generous support truly grateful
Meadows Avatar
March 15, 2024 at 4:22 AM
Brilliant! Enjoyed reading this. Well written.
Empress Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 10:54 AM
Awwn thank you so much
Andresen Avatar
March 15, 2024 at 4:08 AM
- A wonderful feeling to read, Ink:) - hugs
Empress Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 10:55 AM
Thank you so much dear anne lise always
Rhymes Avatar
March 15, 2024 at 4:06 AM
So sweet …your happiness is described so well here … it’s amazing
Empress Avatar
March 15, 2024 at 4:06 AM
Thank you dahlin
M  Avatar
March 15, 2024 at 3:53 AM
How beautifully you describe happiness sweet Ink ….especially the home made muffins hehe!! Lovely poem…..Debx
Empress Avatar
March 15, 2024 at 4:06 AM
Ah im a chocoholic and you should try her muffins. Its so good! Really and they are healthy too haha. Thank you sweet debsz.
Rolland Avatar
March 15, 2024 at 2:47 AM
beautiful, and everyone could bring up a new stanza, enjoyed yann
Empress Avatar
March 15, 2024 at 4:07 AM
Thank you so much
Onpaper Avatar
March 15, 2024 at 2:36 AM
watering weathered willows in the wilderness... ooo them alliteration!!! Following lavender streaks of glowing twilight~where happiness glides across cerulean skies, there u go making magic with these gorgeous elements.. reminiscing magic within violet vapors, recoloring mauve meadows on watercolor wallpapers. Ooo love that line!!! Happiness is an endless emotion of peaceful purification,when soul feels warmth through internal perfection. This is an absolute beauty… this piece is stunning papi
Empress Avatar
March 15, 2024 at 4:30 AM
Ah papi might edit later haha thank u
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